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By : h0lden
  • From ANON - Sandy on April 30, 2004
    I think the bunnies are fighting back. I really like Chapter 9, but it shows up twice - once as Chapter 9 and again as Chapter 1 San
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  • From ANON - laceyweasl on February 23, 1920
    I just left a review but I was kicked off and I'm not sure if you got it. You deserve two anyway. This is an excellent story and I felt like I just won some money when I realized there was an update. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on April 28, 2004
    Awww Severus! I love that guy so much. anywayz i think that this story is brilliant and hope to see u update soon!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on April 27, 2004
    Hmm and the plot thickens!!! This just gets better and better! The whole Lucius and Pettigrew talk was good! I kept thinking you spineless traitor!!! Then the thing w/ Lily! That's not good! They gotta get out of the past before they really ruin things for Lily and James! Then there was the Hermione w/ the hurt knee and ankle and young Severus playing doctor! Man that was steamy and they haven't even done anything yet! On one hand I want older Snape to get there fast and get them out of there before something bad happens on the other hand I want Hermione and young Severus to continue!!! I hope you can update again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on April 27, 2004
    Hehehe. Don't worry, I believe that the bunnies are there. I had a bunny episode with fan fiction, infact, it was so severe that I had to add them into a story. But that is a different tale...

    Loved the update, I even more love the interaction betweermiermione and younger Snape. Maybe Severus isn't so bad...only another update will tell!!! (Hint hint, nudge nugde...update!!!!!!!!)
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  • From ANON - Sandy on April 27, 2004
    Oh, I am so glad I started reading this. It's not just another time turner - thank you. I love the 'memories' coming to haunt the adult Severus.
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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on April 26, 2004
    I am so Lucky! I found your story last night. A bout of insomnia wasn't wasted. I enjoyed it so much I looked in on it again today and wonder of wonders it has been updated. I love it!

    Snape is evil, but you get hints that he can be redeemed and Adult Severus. (Evil Laugh)

    I can't wait.

    Thanks for the trip!
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  • From ANON - Sandy on April 26, 2004
    When I first saw this I thought - great another time turner - so I didn't read it right away. I read it today and I like it, but I'm a little confused - in chapter four - when they show up in the past you have Hermione saying - "We have to go find a new time turner! We don't even have our wands and you know what's going to happen when we get back? We're going to be expelled! Dumbledore is-". So, I'm thinking cool - no wands, no time turner. They really are in a fix. Then in chapter five you have Lily say - "Let's see your wands then." The next paragraph is - "Draco, Harry and Hermione dug dug around in their robes, grasping the handles of their wands and dragging them out for Lily's inspection. She glanced from Hermione's to Draco's, and her eyes stopped on Harry's." and then the conversation goes on - So, was Hermione just being hysterical, was this a boo-boo?



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  • From ANON - Sabrina on April 26, 2004
    Good chapter. Sorry there are no more bunnies. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on April 26, 2004
    But...but...no bunnies?!

    *pouts*

    Well, I suppose the real story makes up for it. Looking forward to another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on April 26, 2004
    I loved this chapter it was really good. Lol the modern day Snape has got to be so comfused by whats going on... GOOD :) keep up the brill work
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  • From ANON - olka-polka on April 26, 2004
    I believe that you will not abandon this great story (You never do...;)) So I'll wait next chapter with impatience. Thank you, Holden, as reading your stories is always a pleasure...
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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on April 25, 2004
    I'm really enjoying your story. I love the darker, ynsecnsecure Snape. You could rewrite HP history. Or at least take us for a wonderful ride.

    I'm not in the least bit fluffy or own a whip...however, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on April 25, 2004
    Hehehe. I'm looking forward to more story, and to more of the author's adventures with the Italian Mob bunnies. Hehehe...update soon, bitte?
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on April 25, 2004
    Liked the new chapter. Please keep writing.
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