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Reviews for Making sure the boy who lives, actually does...

By : h0lden
  • From ANON - nesscafe on April 24, 2004
    This story just gets better and better! I am all excited whenever I see a new chapter! PLEASE update again! And FAST!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miki on April 16, 2004
    Laughing as bunnies gather round author...in attempt to force yet more chapters from author. Yay!!! Wait...is that the author creeping out the door with all the story stored inside their head. ARRGGHH!!!! Anyway, I am a reluctant fan. Love your other pieces as well. Keep the chappies rolling. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on April 16, 2004
    The story is great. I like the way u have made Snapes character. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Megan on April 16, 2004
    This is a FUN fanfiction. I absolutely believe the world you've created. I love how Hermione and Snape interact. Write more, and soon!!
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  • From ANON - XxphenixX on April 06, 2004
    Fantastic fic, darling. I love that Hermione, y, ay, and Malfoy go back, as opposed to the usual only Hermione or something like that. Makes it much more amusing. Ron's bewilderment and trademark confusion at everyone's disappearance was such a movie moment. Love the portrayal of Lily and Remus's attempted groveling on behalf of James. Now how could you leave us with such a cliffie? Have not bunnbunnies come back to yell at you? If they're no longer threatening you, I'end end my own bunny on you. Not a plot bunny, no. (If I had any of those, I'd be using 'em meself.) My bunny, whom I named Lucy - after Lucy Lawless from Xena and Lucy from "I Love Lucy" - is actually quite ferocious when she wants to be. Not really. But she does like eating shoes. That's it! She'll eat your shoes! So update!
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  • From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 28, 2004
    Ooh, what could this mean? Poor Harry. "Be careful what you wish for..." Got a bit confused in the middle as to POV, but soon sorted it out. I've been awake too long. Excellent chapter, Kait x
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on March 22, 2004
    I enjoy your stories and look forward to seeing where you take this one. It should definatly be interesting with a slightly crazed Harry and vengeful (sp?) Draco along!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on March 22, 2004
    wow, this is certainly a great start. i starttart because after three chapters, they are just heading back now. it was surprising that draco is included in the trip, but a welcome twist. i am however disappointed that this story is in the hermione/snape category. that's not really my favourite pairing, but since they are going back in time, it should be interesting to see how hermione deals with a teenage snape. the characters are very nicely developed, even harry's manic reactions. now for something negative. youe mae many spelling errors scattered throughout the chapters. spelling errors are easy to fix though. i'm not worried about them too much. i am worried about when the next chapter comes out. leaving it as a cliffhanger is a dirty, sneaky trick. you sly fox you.
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  • From ANON - snapesdaughter on March 21, 2004
    i think you have a wonderful begging and should keep ue goe good work
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