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Reviews for The Dark Princess

By : radicaledwardfaye
  • From ANON - Alisia McCowan on March 29, 2004
    I like the first chapter ar. ar. Not use to reading stories about magic and what not but you have managed to keep me interessted. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more of your great works. You go girl. I am making Lowman read it as well.
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  • From slygriff21 on March 26, 2004
    I love this story so far. I love how you have Hermione strong and independant. She's not a weaklin at all. I can't wait to read more. I also love how you have shown a bit of a soft side to Voldemort. This shoud be a very very interesting story. Please update soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Watchman on March 25, 2004
    Chapter three... well, its up for posting's sake. Will review it more when its fleshed out.
    ;)
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  • From ANON - Watchman on March 25, 2004
    I'm still wishing blood red gets occasionally swapped with crimson. A trifle of a concern, to be sure, but I think that chapter two would benefit from a cutaway to whats going on back at Hogwarts... or perhaps another scene away from Herminone (sic) but still at Voldemorts. Don't want to overstate her role in this story... use it as a time passing trick for pacing.

    Keep it up. ;)
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  • From ANON - Watchman on March 25, 2004
    Not knowing that much of the Harry Potter universe, I do know that the characterizations really come through with its casual tone... Dialogue is natural, not pompous or lethargic in it's mood. Obviously a work in progress, but once its polished up it's going to read even smoother than it already does. Really gets to the action immediately. Keep at BT BTW: Crimson red slicks up a description even better than blood red. Try it.
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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on March 25, 2004
    Like I said before I like it so far and can't wait to read the rest. I will be checking up regularly to see what you make of it.

    Just a quick thing. You do seem to have a few errors in there, but nothing that a beta won't fix. Other than that....nothing to complain about.

    ArienAstera
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  • From ANON - Nebula on March 25, 2004
    I'm definietely likeing . Ne.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 25, 2004
    Chapter 3.... So now we know who took Hermione & that her friends have been looking for her!!! I am kind of hoping that Severus will recognize her even through the glamour charm!!!

    I do like the basic idea of your story & am looking forward to watching its progress!!! The one thing that I did notice was that there were quite a few spelling errors (I know I make them in my reviews too*
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 24, 2004
    Chapters 1 & 2... This is something different than I have read & am curious to see where you take it!!! I am also curious to see why no one has come after her as well as what Severus' part will be in all of this!!! Til chapter 3, deb >^..^<


    P.S., Who was it that kidnapped her?
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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on March 24, 2004
    Wow!! thanks for giving this a go!! I'm really excited about reading it. I like it so far. Keep it up!!
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