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Reviews for True Vanity

By : Keshu
  • From Serenitas on March 27, 2004
    It sent a shiver down my spine it did. I loved the vivid descriptions and the slight hint that perhaps Dumbledore is a voyeur *hee* More of this fic would be nice.
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  • From ANON - Slinkykittie on March 27, 2004
    Beautifully written as always. I love reading all the things you write, they're always fantastic.
    Mmmm moist
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  • From ANON - Outpatient04 on March 27, 2004
    "erised stra ehru oyt ube cafru oyt on wohsi"

    I feel that this story conveys the overwhelming self-love of Narcissa in an extremely concise manner with excellent use of language and plot device. When Narcissa looks in the mirror it seems that it is the author's intent that we are left uncertain as ho iho is in control - is it Narcissa in Hogwarts, or Narcissa is the mirror? This ambiguity could perhaps be explored at a later date, wirh Narcissa in other situations with or without the Mirror of Erised.

    From research, I understand that Narcissa's maiden name was Black and I am undecided whether this is a deliberate attempt to inject yet more ambiguity - if it is then it has certainly succeded - or a simple error with the timeline. I believe this to be so due to the fact that for Narcissa to be a Malfoy then she must be an adult, but this is is at odds with her apparent pupil status; if Narcissa is indeed an adult then it gives scope for Dumbledore's reactions to be expanded upon at a later date. The other possibility is that Narcissa keeps her married name so that there is less confusion among readers and is not so much an error, but simple creative license to ensure accessibility for the reader.

    In summary, True Vanity is a well crafted story that has more to it than meets the eye. It is a credit to the author and shows no small amount of talent.
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  • From ANON - My Red Angel on March 25, 2004
    I now need sex. Unsure about the use of the word "rub"... but other than that it rawked.............. I hate Harry Potter, so getting me to like this and others you have written has been difficult. But you have more talent than J K Arsehole could ever dream of.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on March 25, 2004
    this could be such a good story. i hope that 'FIN' at the end isn't indicative of an actual end. you hardly scratched the surface. what is that mirror? how is it dangerous? what fun can narcissa get into with it? come on, inquiring minds want to know. however, i do have some points i have to comment on. firstly, dumbledore's hair. narcissa was at the school, oh about 20 maybe 30 years ago. dumbledore at the time of harry has to be over a hundred, so he would be about 70 or 80 years of age. not young enough to have brown hair. was it a glamour? i don't see dumbledore being so vain. also, in your summary you mention femslash. i didn't really think it was femslash at all. it was a magical mirror image of her but not really another woman to call it femslash. delve more into the story and it may explain things better. i want to read of of this. that's a hint.
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  • From ANON - Nick on March 24, 2004
    Wow, that's amazingly hot stuff! I think I'll just stop exercising now that I have this story to keep my heart rate up!

    You control words brilliantly, just like the rest of your work. I can't get enough of it! Keep up the great work, and I hope we see Narcissa again soon... :D
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