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Reviews for Crossing the Line

By : Redrum
  • From soloflamelady on May 19, 2009
    I am sorry that you don't write anymore but I love your story Crossing the line and would love to read the end of it. If you ever do update you will have one happy reader here.
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  • From arisblaze on January 15, 2009
    Sigh- I thought I would never argue this again but...
    Do you know by chance who was the first one that came up with the idea that the bicorn was a horse (two-horn unicorn)? I know it wasn't described on the Lexicon so I went looking. I found out that whomever started that is wrong... sorry.
    The real beast is much, much scarier- it's a demonic black panther by the way- sort of a two horned griffin. There's an online monsterology website if you want to see it for yourself- I forgot the site's name.
    The originator of this particular bicorn just created a large man-eating... goat.

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  • From Makovaso on January 17, 2008
    Please update soon.
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  • From thePrincesJewel on December 25, 2005
    *glares at last few paragraphs* Dammit, why does the beautiful one always have to be such a jackass??? Oh well. Sev will know he's coming. That's a plus, I think.

    Nice to see that the two are finally starting to be happy, and that things are, apparently, improving. Rose, somehow, was not a surprise. Lucius preparing to go after Harry is, but isn't... and may I just add a "gah!" at the idea of him curled up around Voldie's leg? *adds the "gah!"* And also a "yitch" shudder. *shudders*

    So, vampire army, ready in a week; bad teacher in Hogwarts yet again (what is it with Dumbledore and his piss-poor teacher choices, anyhow?); and Lucius prepared to attack. Hmmm... looks like the next few chappies should be interesting.
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  • From ANON - margryt on November 14, 2005
    Hey this is a great story, but when are you going to update again? This is such a great story!! Please finish it!!
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  • From ANON - Zanris on June 30, 2005
    Awsome chapter! Besides very well written..ahem.. "naughtiness", the characters have fallen into their repsective personalities very well. I love that Sev and Harry actually truelly care about each other. The story is really starting to speed up! Please update soon and keep up the great writting (PS: great portrayal of vampires ;)
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  • From ANON - brinian on May 11, 2005
    This is really lovely. I'm not usually a fan of vampire fics, but the character development in this one is excellent.
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  • From ANON - alliekatgal on May 04, 2005
    I know I read the beginning of this a while ago, but I just read all twelve chapters and it simply keeps getting better! Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Morgan Le Fay on April 25, 2005
    awesome!!!! impatiently waiting for the rest of it!!!
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  • From ANON - pinktarg on April 13, 2005
    I love this story. Your writing style is easy to read and flows like waves and the plot is intriguing and engaging. I is obvious that you have spent much time and care in your writing. I look forward to future updates.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on March 20, 2005
    Thank you for the update!!!!! This chapter was worth the wait. At least Harry and Severus had some time to play before they have to get back to the fight.
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on December 16, 2004
    Oi! I love this fic!!! You have no idea how bad I've wanted to read an HP fic with vampires in it. You're actually makes sense and isn't immature or written foolishly. I love it! Please continue with more?
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  • From ANON - SavvyCCU on December 16, 2004
    I have never been so captivated by a story as I have been by yours. You are truly an artist of the English language and, if you haven't already, should consider a career involving it in some way. My only critique is that you tend to repeat yourself in certain parts of the story. When you write about when Harry and Severus are about to fall asleep and summon the blanket, your readers are going to automatically assume that it is by wandless magic at this point. You do not need to include that Severus does it wandlessly any longer unless you just wish to do it for the extra clarification. Other than that, your story is truly amazing and I have not read a story so captivating since I picked up the first of the books nearly six years ago. Having such a way with then English language as you do is a true gift; use it well. You are an extremely good author and I do hope that you update soon. If it is not too much trouble, could you please e-mail me when you update? I have spent three and a half hours over the past two nights after work reading this one story and I would love to see how it ends. Thank you.

    ~*~SavvyCCU~*~
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  • From ANON - Miki on December 13, 2004
    all i can say is brilliant. enough said brilliant! please update soon so need more of that... so brilliant.

    Miki
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  • From ANON - Gershwhen on October 17, 2004
    I'm really enjoying this story. You're doingreatreat job of character development, nothing is too rushed! I like that their relationship is developing a "realistic" pace (well , realistic for a magical world). The descriptions of the magic and the type of vampire Severus is were very creative. This whole stoas ras really sucked me in and I hope that you will continue to work on it and post many more parts!!

    Thank you for sharing.
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