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Reviews for Crossing the Line

By : Redrum
  • From ANON - spag on September 19, 2004
    hi there,
    really great story. i like the vampire sev ...all those secrets they both have. Please continue writing, you can't just leave them there.
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  • From ANON - mishap on September 13, 2004

    I have been following this story since chapter one and I just ador. Th. There is never enough Vamp Sev in the world. Since I am utter crap at remembering to give feedback I thought I would take this chance to say how much I love this story and hope to see more soon. I just wish (not that I have any rooom to talk) it could be written faster. *sigh*

    BTW You might want to check the formatting on chap 9 the entire story is underlined.
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  • From ANON - Jane on September 02, 2004
    Oh dear GOD that was good. Please please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Fatal_Succubus on August 10, 2004
    This has got to be one of, if not the, most amazing story I've read so far. I couldn't stop reading it, and I need more. You're doing an amazing job of writing so far, and it's so real that I can imagine it being part of the original Harry Potter series. Please, continue to write more of this wonderful story, I don't know if I can live without it. Thanks for giving me something worthwhile to read in my spare time. You are the greatest.
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  • From ANON - Fatal_Succubus on August 10, 2004
    This has got to be one of, if not the, most amazing story I've read so far. I couldn't stop reading it, and I need more. You're doing an amazing job of writing so far, and it's so real that I can imagine it being part of the original Harry Potter series. Please, continue to write more of this wonderful story, I don't know if I can live without it. Thanks for giving me something worthwhile to read in my spare time. You are the greatest.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol (too lazy to sign in) on July 31, 2004
    Love it! More! MOre! MORe! MORE!
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  • From ANON - Kathleen on July 22, 2004
    Damn you damn you and damn you!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! This is so good! so...heart.rts.rts...good....love it....I stayed up all night to read to this point, I LOVE this fic!! Great job, your a wonderful or. or. ^_^. YOUR WONDERFULLLLLLLL MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MROE MREO MERO ....Okay, I'm going to sleep now, but damnit more! please? pretty please? with cherries and everything?
    ~kit~
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  • From ANON - lennoxrose on July 21, 2004
    An absolu bea beautiful story! I like the way you developed the characters and the story was not too slow or too fast.
    It has sweet 'fluffy' parts and sad ones, and I can definately say that this is one of the best SS/HP stories I've read. Rock on.
    Are you planning to continue with it? I'd love to see more. ;)
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  • From ANON - Sarah on June 30, 2004
    This is great, really well writen, please contiune
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  • From ANON - Aine on June 19, 2004
    I really loved your story I hope you update it soon. My favorite pairing is Severus and Harry. Did you know that the guy who plays Snape in the HP movies is also the bad guy in Die Hard? He looks good with blond hair but I must confess that I am partial to the Professor Snape guise. There are a lot of great HP stories out there and I con honestly tell you that yours rivals the best. Please soon update your story because I can't wait to read the rest of it, I would just go insane if you abandoned this story as so many other fanfiction writers are wont to do. Your story is truely a dimond among gems and a inspiration to fellow writers and readers of fanfiction. I hope things work out for the professors they both seem to deserve happiness after all that they have been through. I don't normally write reviews you your work was exceptional enough to warrant some praise. Please keep writing you touch so many people through stories.

    An Adoring Reader,
    Aine
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  • From ANON - Jet on June 13, 2004
    Such a wonderful story you've written. I love how its developing, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mel on May 30, 2004
    I love this story and am eagerly anticipating the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Hygea on May 29, 2004
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  • From ANON - soultaker on May 29, 2004
    Awwwwww! Its sooooo cuuuuuuuute!!!!!!!!!! Please update the story really really soon!!! You're an awesome writer!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LadyBrannon on May 23, 2004
    This is a phenomenal story! You have me completely hooked into this plot. Hooked! :) I love the war torn Harry, Severus and his characterization, and I adore the time and effort you took to get them to the point they are now (end of chapter 6).
    Incredibly well done too! Far too often, I have read stories that have great plots, but horrible grammar, or vice versa. Yours, I am pleased to say, has neither horrible grammar or plot. This is a very well done story. Good job!
    LadyBrannon


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