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By : shelia
  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on July 10, 2004
    Hey Andrian,
    Is Hermione keeping a dream journal with the book that Severus gave her? She handled herself well with the Slytherins.
    So, the crazy old loon is Lucius's mother. Figures that she was so cruel.
    I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - wendynat on July 10, 2004
    Love this line: "The purpose of my eyes is to see the world in all its beauty and horror and choose to focus on what I want, not what anyone else perceives."

    Great chapter! I liked the DE meeting and Percy's request, particularly Sev's answer ;). And as for Lucius and Narcissa - I can't wait to see how the dynamics work with the mother in the picture now...
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  • From ANON - LadyTuesday on July 10, 2004
    As always, your writing takes my breath away. Yet another marvelous installment. Please don't be a stranger in your updates!

    ~~ ** Lady Tuesday ** ~~
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  • From ANON - Moise on July 01, 2004
    Wow please update soon, I cant wait to find out who the woman lizzie is looking after is called.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2004
    Am I evil for thinking Lucius deserves every thing he's gotten? Oh well. Fantastic plot and writing, you should give yourself a pat on the back for this.
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  • From ANON - PixieDust on June 18, 2004
    I absolutely loved part 1 of this story, and am enjoying part 2 just as much. You're an incredible author! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sophie on April 23, 2004
    Sorry, forgot to tell you, that I really like it, that you put "Greensleeves" into the story. I learned to play it on the piano some months ago and I really love it. But do you know any lyrics? I just can't find them. And though I was told, that this song is absolutely stereotypical for images like green fields and small forests and so on, and I recognized that stereotype within your fanfic as well, I like it no matter what. So, nice choice. ;)
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  • From ANON - Sophie on April 23, 2004
    Sorry, that I didn't review sooner, but school and job kept me quite busy these last few days. But anyways, I love this story. This is so great and I almost fell off my chair when I read that Molly Weasley will teach the kids. That was a really interesting idea and I can't wait to read how the Trio and Ginny cope with it. Perhaps that's a way to keep the story funny and lighthearted, when the darker topics come along. I am also very excited to know whom Hermione chose in the end of Damaged Goods as her Guardian. (Hopefully Severus?!?) I really hope you will get into the details of her magic and her relationship/or not relationship with Severus. You know, I'm so happy you finally started with this story. Please keep going. (I know you will.) :) I'm absolutely fascinated by your talent. It's really amazing how you write. Bye, Sophie
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 20, 2004
    I read all of Damaged Goods, so I am a little confused.
    Why is Lucius being portrayed in such a sympathetic tone so far? I thought (and hoped) he had died at the end of Damaged. I wanted him to die a slow, agonizing death after what he did to Hermione. (Severe pain.) He's a sadist and deserves every bad thing that happens to him. (shakes fist)
    Who is the old woman? Is it Hermione in the future? (just a guess) At first I thought it was Narcissa, but now I'm not so sure. It's a mystery which I hope you will reveal soon.
    So, Molly's the new DADA teacher. Thank God it's not Percy. Harry would have probably killed him.
    I can't wait to see Molly face off with Malfoy Jr. She is not going to take any of his crap. Want to see some serious points taken away and detention ordered. PLEASE!!!!
    Still not sure about Severus and Hermione's relationship. What's up with that??? And are they (Dumbledore and Severus) going to help develop Hermione's mage powers?

    Sorry that I haven't reviewed til now. I wanted to have a few more chapters up to read at the same time. Love your work.
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - ara on April 20, 2004
    Outstanding! Well, I know I'm pleased with this update. The whole Snape/Hermione relationship/friendship is interesting. I'm rooting for them to get together and I wonder how long will Snape put up with Hermione seeing Harry before he feels the need to 'fix' that? Also what's the deal with Lucius? Freaky, yes?! Great chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Linis on April 18, 2004
    Excellent...can't wait for more... doesn't 'di hop hopper' come from the little mermaid and is the name given to a fork to brush your hair with?

    anyways update soon.

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on April 18, 2004
    I love your Lucius in this fic - the gold mask is a great idea, Fudge's reaction was very amusing. Very good chapter - Severus' irritation at Dumbledore keeping it a "surprise" was well done and realistic, on both men's parts. Lovely interaction with Neville - I love seeing him in fanfic as something other than a simple comic relief. Can't wait for ch3!
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  • From ANON - Midnight Tiger on April 12, 2004
    TWISTED!!! oh wow! i almost feel sorry for Lucy, but at the same time that whole phantom of the opra thing is fitting. wonderful chapter, i hadnt realized you continued this in a seperate post or else i would have read it sooner. wonderful update and i look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - amsev on April 06, 2004
    I just finished reading Damaged Goods. Amazing Story! It is going to be horribly, horribly difficult to read part 2 Mosaics in installments, as I just read Damaged almost in one shot (I started last night, went to bed, finished this afternoon!) Wow. Mosaics promises to be even better reading the first chapter. Update frequenpleaplease! I realize this kind of story is most emphaticalot eot easy to write, but I (and many others) do look forward to reading much more!
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  • From ANON - Sophie on March 27, 2004
    This is so awesome... I was so excited when I read your introduction, that this is the sequel to Damaged Goods... I love your style of writing and the first part about this mysterious woman promises that the second part of this story will be as complex as the other part... I really want to read more and I'm so happy that you finally continued... if you still remember my offer with the German translations I would be happy to be of help... and I just have to add that the quote you put on top of the chapter is very nice... so, just keep going... bye, Sophie
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