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By : Elehyn1
  • From ANON - BP on January 15, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!! Please update soon! This is the upteenth time I've read this fic, and I really need more!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the best snape/harry stories I've ever read!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Demon on November 26, 2005
    this is goooooooooood i can't with for the next chapter please update soon
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  • From ANON - Ari on November 11, 2005
    Nice work, I liked it.
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  • From ANON - CrazyFangirl on August 19, 2005
    wow, such a long time i didn't come across fanfics and good as this one, it's so perfect!!!
    i wish there was more; will be waiting X3 *goes to see your other fanfic when should be sleeping;2am* ^^;;
    keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - malimillions on August 05, 2005
    Aw.... that's such a sad sad note! Poor Snapey-poo!

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  • From ANON - Obsessed on July 29, 2005
    This is a really good story. I like it a lot. I hope you update soon. If you could, please send me the chapter before you post it. If you want, you could always sent it to me to beta. I like this story a lot, as I already said, and I hope that you update soon.
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  • From ANON - 12blue12 on July 23, 2005
    arg no more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 damn it update soon!
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  • From ANON - Victoria FE on July 16, 2005
    "derived immediately towards" is a little odd. To "derive" means to "come from." I DERIVE from florida. This story is DERIVED from Harry Potter. Be careful about making your words too complicated for your reader. Also, look up the literary term "weak wording" or "weak writing." Basically, it means that you use too many words like "it" and "that" and "had" "was." For example, the sentence I came up with: "It was cold." I can reword this. What was cold? The weather. And how did the character/narrarator know that the weather was cold? try again, revised: "The snow beneath my feat crunched as I made my way to the bus stop. I shivered despite the sunlight." Holy canoli! Now the reader knows that the weather was cold. After all, how could it be snowy w/o the cold? And its cold enough that "I shivered" even when the sun was out. And "I made my way to the bus stop." Now we have a potential plot. My sixth grade english teacher used to say, "Show; don't tell." My mother says, "Actions speak louder than words." Try that.
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  • From ANON - Kay on July 06, 2005
    MORE PLESAE! I started 2 read this story when it first came out and then I came across it today and it was like "WOW! More chapters, oh happy day." PLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - kara on July 06, 2005
    oh! I love this story, and you are doing a very good job translating, and poor, poor Snape. He should take advantage of Harry while he has the chance.

    Anyway, will you e-mail when more comes out? Please?
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  • From ANON - Katie K on July 06, 2005
    ooh! Please update soon! This is absolutely terrific! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Jaima` on July 05, 2005
    I just read the whole story tonight. This is great. Please more like this last chapter! Very hot.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on July 04, 2005
    I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. I think everyone understands that it takes a while for you to translate the chapters into English. Don't worry about how long it takes, just please continue.
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on July 04, 2005
    Oh update soon. I just can't wait!!!
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  • From ANON - melody de mort on July 04, 2005
    oooh. purty. wait! antidote?*sobs* they didn't get to do the wild thing!
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