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Reviews for Finally Home

By : Browynnath
  • From ANON - Triospleasure on May 11, 2004
    Ok looks good


    Trio
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 30, 2004
    cute. thanks.
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  • From ANON - jenn on March 29, 2004
    short chapters, simple plot, fluffy so far... i adore it. :) and how dare you leave it at that for the chapter...
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 28, 2004
    I love Harry/Hermione stories, they are my favourite. Your chapters are a little on the short side, maybe consider building up your detail to give them a little more meat. Hope you continue, thanks.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on March 27, 2004
    you're off to a good start i think. i like how at ease harry and hermione are. they know each other so well, almost like they've been married forever. i do believe this will be a sweet story, but i guess i should hold my judgement until there's more. i do have some criticism though. the story seems to switch between past and present tense a lot. there needs to be only one. please choose one. other than that, i look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Creepy Susie on March 26, 2004
    update update update update update
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