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By : jonelin
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 31, 2004
    Chapter 8... This chapter is so filled with powerful emotions, pain, hurt, comfort & hope!!! You did an AMAZING job of writing this!!! I am sitting here with tears in my eyes, sad for what happened to her, sad that Severus hurts for what she did for him & yet happy because they are comforting each other & he holds the hope that he may be able to help her end the curse!!!

    I am very much looking forward to your next update as I can't wait to see if Severus can find the counter-curse!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - jenocclumency on March 30, 2004
    Wow, great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 30, 2004
    Chapter 7... I like how things are moving along between them!!! I like how he used an excuse for going up & reading her log, made him happy*
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  • From ANON - vicki on March 30, 2004
    This story is very good. I am
    really enjoying it. Thank you
    for writing it. i have been
    anxiously awaiting your updates.
    please continue this great story

    Vicki
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  • From ANON - jenocclumency on March 29, 2004
    I'm ry eny enjoying your story!
    You have a slight problem with switching back and forth from present tense to past tense, and you need to work on that. Otherwise, you're a very good writer -- you're moving the plot along very smoothly. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 29, 2004
    Chapters 1 - 6... Finally got a chance to read your story & I am really liking it!!! I am looking forward to seeing how they behave toward each other the longer they are together!!! I am also curious to see if Harry & Ron will come into the mix somewhere along the line?!? Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - mele on March 28, 2004
    he, he, he. another great chapter! can't wait til hermione introduces him to the internet. will he find all the naughty sites? or will he bump into her e-friends and find out embarassing things? aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - mele on March 27, 2004
    i like it! the story is moving quickly, covering a lot of ground. i look forward to the rest! aloha, mele
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  • From lily25 on March 27, 2004
    I think you are off to a great start!!!!!! The story is interesting and i like this particular challenge. I'm looking forward to seeing where you decide to tit. it.
    Lily
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