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Reviews for It Takes a Miracle

By : jar
  • From ANON - Zixra on December 13, 2008
    I don't review chapters or stories, but this one touched me so deeply I couldn't help but want to postpone my awe to you. I weeped through many chapters and the agony in my heart still lingers on.
    Simply beautiful.
    I read your other story as well, and might add here that it too was most touching and unique... I can only wish that you write something more for us to enjoy.

    With best regards;
    Zixra
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  • From ANON - revolsepans on September 17, 2006
    Jenny, Jenny, Jenny.......come on!!! Please give us the ending. This is torture. There can't be much more left. Please Please...I'm not above begging, pleading, going down on my knees and groveling. Tell me what you want me to do and I'll do it!!!! Take care of your kids, go to work for you, run the PTO. Whatever the real life problem, I'm ready to lend a hand just to hear the end of the story. I know you have it, so give it to us. Even if it's a little rough. We'll help you polish it.......seriously. You know I love this story. I've been with it since the beginning. Come on, throw me a bone!!!! Love ya gal. Come back to us.
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  • From ANON - revolsepans on July 10, 2006
    Yeah, you're back. Great chapter. Snape is a total asshole right to the very end!!!! I love it. Ohhh, how will Gerry reign him in?? I can't wait to see the end. I agree with a previous reviewer: Why aren't more people reading this??? (Or does this have to do with the new AFF format? Did you lose some reviews? Also, I don't really see how I can log in, but maybe I'm automatically logged in??) Keep up the great work....and UPDATE THE LAST CHAPTER SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on September 12, 2005
    Jenny -- I've been reading this story since May of 2004 and it just gets better. To bad more people aren't appreciating it. Can't believe there are only 13 reviews. Thank you for persistently continuing to write it.
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  • From revolsepans on August 28, 2005
    Hey there!!! I'm missing you and this story. If you're busy, I understand. But if you're in a slump, please let me encourage you!! This is a great story. I know you have vision, direction and purpose for this storyline. Don't be discouraged. Keep going. We all love this story and you know we'll help you in whatever way we can. Keep writing, 'cause I keep reading!! Good Luck.
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  • From ANON - revolsepans on July 29, 2005
    GREAT!! If you have a notification list, please put me on it. I'm enjoying this story so much. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh my I love the way Snape doesn't want to surrender, but he can't help it. And Gerry is also so unsure, but willing to force the issue and not let him push her away. Perfect.
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  • From revolsepans on June 02, 2005
    Great story....can't wait to read what happens next. Please, please update soon. I like this weakened Snape. He's still snarky, but it's a refreshing change from the 'super-human' Snape who is more often in stories. Kudos!
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  • From ANON - revolsepans on February 25, 2005
    I love this story. Keep Severus snarky like you've done already. I am aching to see (read) them together. The tension is great. Good idea about this "Potion". Plot is very intriguing. Please keep updating and continue with this wonderfully interesting story.
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  • From ANON - Odddoll on September 20, 2004
    Jenny,
    This was very nicely done. Snape's situation at the beginning of the chapter brought tears to my eyes.
    Marianne

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  • From ANON - Severuscarus on August 19, 2004
    Jenny Jar,
    I have to say, this is my current, top of the charts, favorite fanfic. I'm not sure why, but I love it. This is why I am offering to beta for you. The problems you have with grammar, word usage, and punctuation, are detracting from a fine story. And they are so easily fixed. If you are interested, I've included my email.

    The current twist and complication is really nice, by the way. I never even considered that she was making an unauthorized redux, and wouave ave to pay the fines. I would love to see these two redeemed. They so deserve it.

    Marianne (severuscarus, OddDoll)

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  • From ANON - Jade on August 17, 2004
    wow this is good i luv it cant wait for thxt uxt update

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  • From ANON - Severus Carus on July 29, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter. You just are not going to make it easy on them (which is good!). I can't wait for the next. Severus Carus (formerly Odd Doll)
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  • From ANON - White Lilac on June 14, 2004
    Hi, jenny jar.

    First of all, English is not my first, nor my second language, just as you, and if I saw a few minor mistakes, they don
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  • From ANON - Marianne on June 03, 2004
    Hi,

    I wanted to say first of all, I LOVE THIS STORY. You've gotten inside Snape'ad ead exactly the way I see him - nasty, mean and self-loathing. I'm working on my own fanfic, which explores the question 'how can a perfectly sane woman fall in love with Snape?' and it encourages me not to soften him one little bit.

    You have a good handle of using imagery and 'telling not saying' and the pacing is quite good, for the most part. The one piece of constructive criticism that I have is about the beginning. You start right out with a very dramatic bit, which is good. However, by breaking in with the parts about Gerry and how she got to Hogwarts, you really killed it. I was so frustrated by it that I actually stopped reading. The way you write them is good, but there is just too much detail leading up to the fight with her boyfriend that does not need to be in there, and it gets in the way of the pacing. We need to know details about Gerry and how she got there, but not as much as you included, I think.

    Also, by breaking it up so many times, the parts about Snape's struggles at the doorway were a TINY bit repetitive. Overall, it was fantastic, but I think you drew it out just a little too much.

    Your prose is good. I suppose that is a writing thing and not an English language thing, because I am AMAZED at how well you write in your 3rd language! There are some grammatical and spelling things, of course, but a good beta can fix those for you.

    PLease keep it up. I can't wait to see them get together (I hope?)

    Marianne

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  • From ANON - Sineed on May 18, 2004
    Your Snape is about the closest to the canon I've seen in a romance fic. There are some good snarky Snapes out there, but then he meets the right OC, and changes his personality, turning into another romance novel protagonist straight out of Harlequin. You're not shying away from what a truly nasty git he is. I can't wait to see how you handle this. Maybe a little coercion is needed??
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