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Reviews for A law to herself

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - gthistle on April 22, 2004
    Oh, excellent. Not only does Hermione remember to do research on a topic that can be researched, but what she finds makes sense in context (I mean stylistically and tonally). Plus, Severus gives backhanded assistance, and because it's directed at Hermione not Harry (as it was in Philosopher's Stone), the trio figure it out. Glorious. The most OOC part of the chapter, and not by much, is the Hogwarts library--though perhaps it has a back door through one of those portraits to Borges' Library, which in the story's world wouldn't surprise me at all.
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  • From ANON - kuniklo on April 22, 2004
    Thanks for the great fic, I have really enjoyed it thus far, read it twice even! The funny bits, and the rest. I am not quite sure how to describe it, but it seems like there is no extraneous text, or bits thrown in that don't have value. If you let this one fizzle out I will never forgive you! hen hen you had Harry do a clever, it made me think of how in the books he occaisionaly comes up with a really funny insult (like when he told dudley the toilet might be sick because it never had anything as nasty as his head in it). I can't even think of a HGSS fic where harry gets a funny insult in.. so like, you should do it!
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  • From ANON - hephastus on April 22, 2004
    Shiv! I love this! I'm so glad you're back! I love the potions and their names; where do you get all your ideas? I can't wait to see more; your work is such an inspiration. Thank you so much.
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  • From ANON - ElfWitch on April 22, 2004
    Dumbeldor proposing.........Super! Hermone character is very alive. Good dialogs.Write MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on April 21, 2004
    Loving it more and more... I really like your Poppy in this fic, particularly this line: "Not to mention that beard; have you noticed how much food gets trapped in there. Frankly, it
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 21, 2004
    Very clever Shiv. So, she just has to marry a pureblood (who will that be again?) in a muggle ceremony and then the laws of the Marriage Act will not apply to them.
    Good one. No one's come up with that before. Very original.
    I won't even ask you to update this soon, cause you're writing (what) 4 stories now. Whenever you update this, I will read it with fervor.
    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 21, 2004
    Chapter 3... Very interesting!!! I do like Poppy's attitude towards all of this!!! I also can't say that I blame Albus for wanting to be a father, but maybe he should look for someone a bit older;-)

    So severus is helping without helping, smart man!!! I can't wait to see what they find out about the potions!!!

    Who was she going to marry indeed;-) I can't wait to see how she goes about figuring it out & then suggesting it to the man she chooses, should be quite interesting all the way around!!! Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^<

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2004
    This story is great! Hooray for clever Hermione. I also very much enjoy Snape's stealth help :)
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  • From ANON - maggie on April 21, 2004
    the first thing that came to mind when i noticed the new chapter was schawing, shortly followed by wahoo, and after reading the latest chapter all i can add is wow! I love your stories, they have a wonderful mix of humor and realisim. so all i can say is keep up the beyond exellent work!
    maggie
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  • From ANON - elisa on April 21, 2004
    Oh I loved Poppy, she's being helpful without being fussy and Severus is helpful without being noble. It's all so right. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on April 20, 2004
    You have been a very good girl and we are pleased to report that you have earned your spanking. The terms of said spanking must be set f cle clearly before you may enjoy it. Failure to comply with this rule will make you ineligable for any further spankings in the future. However, an obscure clause of the contract does say that if you do not produce another chapter to this story within a 'reasonable' time period you will be forced to marry Albus yourself. Have a nice day, Love.
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  • From ANON - Greenstuff on April 19, 2004
    omg! That was the best chapter ending ever. I laughed SO hard. I hope you can update soon, this story is awesome!
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  • From ANON - sheri on April 18, 2004
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  • From ANON - DMS on April 12, 2004
    Evil!Dumbledore! OldPerv!Dumbledore! Ewwwwwwwwwwwwww!
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  • From ANON - Nymphadora Lupin on April 07, 2004
    It's great! I'm still grinning having read the end of the 2nd chapter right now. I always find it hard to accept such an arrogant and ugly version of Dumbledore, but then, I reallke ike it. Keep going!
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