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Reviews for A law to herself

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - bansidh on April 03, 2004
    Damn...I knew what she was doing during that conversation with Dumbledore, but I just got a slow wide evil grin when she mentioned Severus. *cackles wildly* Beautiful, has anyone told you that you're brilliant? Lecherous old perv. Can't wait to see where you go with this, pervy!Dumbledore and sympathetic-if-snarky!Snape.
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  • From ANON - yncarn8 on April 03, 2004
    Simply brilliant. That'e ine in the eye for Albus. Dirty old mage! mak makes Draco look like Prince Charming doesn't it? *snort*


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  • From ANON - Claribel on April 03, 2004
    That was just so, so, so, unbelievably classic! I'm sporting the cheesiest of grins - way to go yucky yucky nauseating
    evil!Dumbledore! I didn't see that coming at all (uck the mental pictures of that one) so go you for having such a screamingly good plot twist. I'm sure in the circumstances Snape will rally round......I'm still smiling, still faintly thinking of bringing up the irish stew I just ate for dinner, and still hoping that you will keep writing this excellent story. There are so few of them - please don't abandon us, and I'll promise to review more!
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  • From ANON - Playmara on April 02, 2004
    Hi there :-)

    It is an interessting start for an story, and I am looking forward to the next chapter. I would have liked this one even more, if at least Hermiones outburst would have been a little bit more in character, but its hard to get "them --> the characters" to cooperate in the beginning, isn
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  • From devsgma on April 02, 2004
    I'm writing a story of my own, so I've been avoiding starting anything new. I don't want to unconsiously 'lift' any ideas, but when I saw your name as the author I couldn't resist. Glad I didn't, love it. Always suspected the law couldn't bee been passed without Dumbledore's approval.
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  • From ANON - madamsprout on April 02, 2004
    Thank you for writing a
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on April 02, 2004
    Absolutely brilliant beginning. The way you've set up the characters is so well done. It's nice to see someone who thinks Hermione might be able to give Lucius a run for his money for once. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Pooka on April 02, 2004
    Your writing is excellent! Also, stories with ass-kicking, uppity Hermiones give fairies their wings. Write more! Write faster!
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  • From ANON - Anna on April 01, 2004
    Ahhh... a Marriage Law fic that I can read without retching. Have I mentioned my deep and abiding love for you lately? A wonderfully in-character reaction for Hermione. Thus far, an auspicious beginning for your foray into the Marriage challenge.

    Still hoping you kill off both Dumbledore AND Fudge!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on April 01, 2004
    I love a pissed off Hermione. She must be fun to write, I know she's fun to read. Will this be a long story? I hope so, I love all of your other works.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - Claribel on April 01, 2004
    Well worth the wait.

    Whilst I'm sure Hermione has her shaky moments (don't we all) I cannot understand how anyone would think she would just roll over and give in completely. I would say a girl with balls, but no, I think possession of breasts is just as valid - balls are not required for strength and determination to do what you believe is right.

    I can't believe the potential of Hermione as a positive role model for girls and young women has passed so many by (re the discussion on WIKTT - I just have to assume most of them are young to make me feel better), and so completely too. In my humblme, me, my eight year old daughter thinks Hermione is fantastic and I encourage that wholeheartedly. Husband isn't using Snape as a role model yet, but I'm working on him.

    Your writing is, as ever, witty and a pleasure to read. No earth shattering critique to offer, just rambling observations, thanks and praise for a good story.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 01, 2004
    I do really like what you have written so far!!! I think that saying Hermione is not only frustrated, but also pissed off would be an extreme understatement!!!

    Where is Albus & what is he up to?!? I think Severus hpokepoken too soon where a contract on his behalf is involved!!!

    It's nice to see that Harry & Ron are making so much effort to let her know they are trying to be supportive!!! I don't think it would take much for Ron to actually poison Draco Malfoy in order to protect Hermione!!! Something tells me that he won't have a chance to follow through with the poisoning though;-)

    Looking forward to seeing what will happen next & who else will be putting contracts out for Hermione's hand!!! Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - droxy on April 01, 2004
    "poor Draco" sums it up.

    Looks like another comedy..


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  • From ANON - jeanette on April 01, 2004
    As always Shiv you delight and entertain me. I just hope that the little TOSSER actually apreciates Hermione efforts not to end up as his wife, then he can marry Pansy and live in some control... Still I can not wait to see Severus under the thumb.

    Jeanette :)
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  • From ANON - yncarn8 on April 01, 2004
    Three cheers for Feisty!Hermione. I love this take on the Marriage Law Challenge so far and look forward to more (not that I am nagging Shiv)

    xx
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