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Reviews for A law to herself

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - magicalwonder on February 16, 2005
    This is an incredibly interesting story. I was not sure if I was going to like the fact that you made their first sexual experience so increidbly difficult, but after reading it and thinking about it, it really only made sence that way. And the slow build of a relationship is often more appealing than the quick burn. After all, a fire with a good foundation burn hotter, longer than one that is all paper and quick to light. Good job. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Nymphe on February 05, 2005
    This is a most entertaining and clever story! Whenver I see the title, my mind keeps reading it as "A law unto herself" for some reason. You have me wondering what Pansy has in mind for Hermione on New Year's...uh oh. The way Dumbledore is presented is an interesting twist--kind of from the POV of Snape and Hermione has just figured it out. I would not worry about rushing into the smut yet--it will be the icing on the cake. While you are completing this novellette, I will check out your past works.
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  • From ANON - Moi on February 04, 2005
    I am enjoying your story very much. I appreciate so much that they aren't drooling over one another, but they are each starting to work under the other's skin. It's the fire that is built carefully before the match is struck that burns the longest. Damn, that sounded corny. Anyway, I'm looking forward to shopping and Boxing Day (and that is rather a first, for me).

    P.S. You write very well, additionally, from a technical aspect. I can't tell you how much I appreciate THAT, after wading through horrible grammar, inappropriate vocabulary malaprops, scandalous punctuation, all in search of a faintly promising plot that gets mishandled in the end. Your work does not appear to be of that ilk. Thank you so very much.
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  • From on December 26, 2004
    I love this story!!!! Just wish you'd update soon. Who would've thought...Snape and Hermione, and they're actually getting along somewhat. I'm interested to see what'll happen next.
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  • From libco on December 09, 2004
    Awwwww. That is so sweet.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on November 06, 2004
    I've enjoyed this story since day one and it's only getting better. That's saying quite a bit for a story that was good straight off the bat. This latest chapter was wonderful - her moving in and deciding to take a page out of Crookshanks's book and sneak up on him. It seems like a very Hermione thing to do. Looking forward to more.
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  • From Weirkat on October 25, 2004
    I've been reading your story...it's still a wonderful read. ~Smiles~ Chapter 14 was funny. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - melissaivory@hotmail.com on October 22, 2004
    and when will they get to sex? that is the question at hand...
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  • From ANON - June on October 22, 2004
    Ch 14 - that was a great letter to Lucius! "Severus Perversity Snape" - poor guy, just like the late Rodney Dangerfield, Severus gets "no respect" from his wife! I'm glad she left him a chocolate bar.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on October 22, 2004
    O.K. you know I really like this story, and before I have enjoyed your teasing but now it is going to far.
    Poor Hermione she must be climbing the walls ( I am) what she desperately needs is a night and day
    of full on loving.

    I am so glad Hermione was glad that Snape enjoyed the chocolate, however, I am sure that she would
    prefer him to SUCK on something else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The story is good, but it seems to be on the wrong net work, perhaps fanfic junior would be approiate.???

    Reduced to three stars for Nothing in the story, going anywhere, at all etc.,
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  • From ANON - fan-rei on October 22, 2004
    i love this fic and how it's turning. Hermione could ask some help from minerva if she wants to suceed through.
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  • From ANON - maggie on October 22, 2004
    hehehe, that was brilliant! another well-done chapter. Of course, I am looking forward to more.
    two bs ubs up!
    maggie
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on October 12, 2004
    Hip, hip, hooray!!!!
    The reviewing system is working again!
    I tried reviewing several times, and I also tried sending you and Ayla an e-mail. I hope you got it.
    Anyway, I love your story! Don't worry about the smut, plot is more important! We may be a perverted bunch here at AFF.net (actually not all of us ^_^), but we do appreciate plot. Keep it up, and thank you for all your hard work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Greenstuff on October 11, 2004
    Heh heh heh.. Loved it! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - maggie on October 09, 2004
    Hello,
    I tried reviewing this when you first posted it tht the review thing was down, so I thought I'd try again. I love this story, actually I love your writing, I think you could write obituaries and they'd be funny and interesting (wanna re-write my text books?). This story is brilliant, and while smut is good, it would seem out of place to early in this story.
    I look forward to seeing more updates with baited breath
    Maggie

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