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Reviews for A law to herself

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 03, 2004
    Chapter 5... FABULOUS chapter!!! I really like the way you wrote the conversation (both inner & joint) between Hermione & Ron!!!

    He didn't really have much reason to put up a fight, she had very well thought out reasons!!! I don't think that she expected him to agree so soon:


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  • From ANON - Keket Amunet on May 03, 2004
    I enjoyed your update very much. Thank you for writing.

    Keket
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  • From ANON - Claribel on May 03, 2004
    Another satisfying chapter. I love your characterisationd thd the plot, and the humour, and the honesty of this story. Your writing style fits the story so well (I have a bit of thing about t tha that reading it is a pleasure. I fail to see how a forced marriage can be romantic unless there was some form of prior involvement between them, so it's good to see a pragmatic approach from Hermione. No unnecessary weeping please (not that I expect you to) but as ever, your lemons will be appreciated at the moment of your choosing!
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  • From ANON - Mikala on May 03, 2004
    Go Hermione! Wow she is definitely a force to be reckoned with.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2004
    I loved the 'proposal' scene, I found it very amusing, and it was very well written.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on May 03, 2004
    you are such a talented writer. the level of wit, intelligence and creativity in the stories i've read are amazing. you show this so easily too. hermione's chat with snape, showed how smart hermione is by thinking everything through so thoroughly. and that only shows how mucu hau have thought this through. they way you turn a phrase, the way you describe the thoughts and actions of the characters really has them in character (by canon standards of course) and makes me extremely jealous. i only wish i had that gift. i can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Kait on May 03, 2004
    Three Cheers (at least) for your feisty, clever Hermione! It's a wonderful balm upon my recently injured mind.
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  • From ANON - witchlight on May 03, 2004
    Oh, wow!! What a great read! I've put off reading A Law to Herself because it's a WIP but now I'm very glad that I went ahead and read up through your latest update. Great characterizations, a truly original response to the Marriage Law thread, and so funny in spots that I find myself still laughing. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on May 03, 2004
    Hee! Such a wonderful chapter. The Hermione/Snape interaction was just...well, perfect for lack of a better word. I could totally see both of their characters saying and acting exactly as you wrote they would. And the Hermione/Ron bit? ~~
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  • From ANON - Moaning Myrtle on May 03, 2004
    Nobly dissembling!Hermione? Gracious!Ron? And I LIKED these unexpected characterizations?? Must be another Shiv installment. *happy sigh*

    I snorted (to my children's amusement) at Severus's thought that marriage with Hermione would likely involve a great deal of arguing. It is my fervent hope it involves a great deal more making up and that you, my dear author, let us see that -- sooner, rather than later, if you please. *looks earnest and pleading*
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  • From ANON - Loopy Loony Luna on May 03, 2004
    I love how this fic is progressing. The proposal seemed very in character for the both of them.
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  • From yncarn8 on May 03, 2004
    Brilliant! Fan-bloody-tastic! I love your take on the marriage law challenge. So far it's absolutwondwonderful.
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  • From ANON - Justine on May 02, 2004
    i just got to the end of chapter 4 in A law to Herself, it's very good, and i hope that you do continue with it. If you ever do continue, could you please e-mail me to let me know? if you could, that would be great! thanx

    justine
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  • From ANON - MNeaux on April 28, 2004
    I do hope that note at the end of ch4 wasn't an indication that you consider the story closed!? I hope to hear Snape's reaction to the proposal. Stupid Laws can be great plot devices!
    (And that you so much for "sod that for a game of soldiers")
    keep posting!
    M
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  • From ANON - Greenstuff on April 27, 2004
    This story is wonderful. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see Severus' reaction to Hermione's proposal.
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