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Reviews for A Ward of Hogwart\'s

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  • From ANON - arcee on April 05, 2004
    Cool story write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Filodea on April 05, 2004
    What a sweet story! I can sympathize completely with Severus. I have four children, all in college. One has flown the nest. I too can cheerfully extend the waiting period for the rest to finish growing up and leave home. It always comes too fast, even though that's what you raise them to do, hopefully.
    The last part of the chapter made me tear up.
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  • From ANON - Tia on April 05, 2004
    I just read all three chapters tonight and I am really looking forward to more. I can't wait to see what you have in store. I loved how Severus "helped" her evil parents along their, er, well death. I can very much see him there, as they yelled for help and completely ignoring them. I think he used a great amount of restraint throughout that situation--let's face it, Snape could have done a lot worse to them!! But this is a really really great story and I am hoping to find more chapters available soon. Please email me whne you do update--- tiaoconnell@yahoo.com I would really love that! Happy writing! ~Tia
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  • From ANON - buttercup on April 02, 2004
    I enjoyed the second chapter every bit as much as the first. I think it is very much in the spirit of canhat hat two years of abuse have passed and this child has not received any help. Even now, Albus seems to be reluctant to intervene.

    In canon, no one at Hogwarts receives help unless it serves Albus' purposes. Luna was more or less tortured by her housemates, Slytherins are permitted to bully muggle-borns, and Snape is permitted to bully Neville. Snape himself was humiliated by the Marauders regularly. It seems to be a Hogwarts tradition going back as far as Moaning Myrtle. I'm eager to see how Albus will handle the situation when Poppy and Severus bring it to his attention.

    May I recom tha that you change your summary? I think many people may be under the mistaken impression that this is a love story between Snape and an OC, and are are missing out on something unique. Just my opinion.

    Well done. I'm looking forward to chapter 3.
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on April 02, 2004
    wow really haunting and interesting!
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  • From buttercup on April 01, 2004
    Interesting start. I am vimprimpressed with the way you have illustrated feelings of compassion in Snape without making him OOC. It's a tough line to walk. You have managed to maintain all of Snape's outer snarkiness (Is that even a word?) while at the same time giving him an inner emotional depth.

    I also enjoyed the way you introduced your OC. We get to know her gradually through Snape's eyes. Your characterization of Dumbledore was spot on as well.

    Another thing I really enjoyed abouis sis story was seeing the events of the books from a different perspective. We have seen the sorting ceremony how many times now through Harry's perspective? It's fascinating to see familiar events from the books from the completely unexplored perspective of the faculty. To me, that is what makes fan fiction so much fun.

    As always, the pace and tone of your writing are excellent. I'm looking forward to your daily updates.

    ~buttercup
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