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Reviews for A Dream Becomes Reality

By : Nikita
  • From Traybell on August 04, 2009
    Thanks goodness Harry is out of that hell hole passing for a home. Look forward to read where things go from here.
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  • From Bonecollector on May 31, 2008
    i love this story already. and to those who don't well, to heck with them. they don't matter, they don't have to read it.
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  • From DarkGothic on August 29, 2007
    i really like this story i hope you continue it
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  • From toads70 on June 01, 2007
    love this , please update ^.^
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  • From oogies4u on April 30, 2007
    oh gawd .. please tell me your still writing this .. its so beautifull.

    The way you discribe everything .. I can not wait to see how you bring the two of them together atlast

    Love it sofar

    DragZ
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  • From WaterSeal on February 15, 2007
    more!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 06, 2007
    loved it! Bookmarked and can't wait for the u-date! Harry/Sev is hot!
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  • From ANON - Zafaran on December 31, 2006
    More, please. This is an interesting start, and I'm interested in seeing where you go with it from here. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
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  • From ANON - Noeturna on September 03, 2006
    well, whoever left mean emails was a jerk, I think. Very good story! Please continue
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  • From ANON - Child of the Darkened Moon on July 24, 2006
    That's sad... really it is... I want to cry. I'm going to kill them... thats it. LET ME AT'M I'LL KILL ALL THREE OF THEM!!! Okay neways.. great story... update soon.. BYEBYE
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on July 21, 2006
    Bastards. Fucking Dursleys. I want Severus to get mad and mean and evil and blow something up. It
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on July 21, 2006
    Seems like Dudley
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on July 21, 2006
    *whistles* Interesting. I love it already. Simply because of the dream. I was sitting here, thinking
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2006
    Please write more i love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Notime on July 18, 2006
    I was so pleased to find this again. I was contemplating doing one of those anoying fic searches in the hope of finding it. I had of course hoped that it would be far larger by now, but I was happy to just be able to read chapter one again (that dream is so hot!) I wasn't sure if you were planning to continue with this story, and I seriously hope you do.
    I would like to suggest that you consider getting a beta reader to catch some of the minor wording errors that detract from your story. There were a few times that you used similar sounding words in place of a more appropriate one such as: (away) instead of awake; (hand) in place of hang; and (sense) instead of since.
    I am sorry you stopped writing due to negative reviews and hope that you continue for those of us that are enjoying your story.
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