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Reviews for Smoke and Fire

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 16, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on August 21, 2006
    Polyjuice?
    And the whole extra kink thing I didn't really understand but maybe I'm just being dumb tonight. Bleeh.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on August 21, 2006
    They're so awkward. Love it.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on August 21, 2006
    I really like this story. >>
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on August 21, 2006
    I like how they're real!!
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  • From Queeny on August 21, 2006
    This challenge seems to be lots of fun.
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  • From ANON - a_reader on August 20, 2006
    This was too funny, too real, and painful, lol. How dare you inject reality into our fantasies??? ;) Well done.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on June 02, 2004
    Wow awsome story, i can't imagine how hard it must have been to keep them crap in bed geez! I loved it though and please please write the polyjuice sequal, pretty please i'd love it so much!!!
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  • From ANON - Psyche on June 01, 2004
    It is truly refreshing to read something with a touch of reality to it. Great job. And write the Polyjuice scene! (And perhaps in this one they will finally be able to better understand each other's wants and needs.)
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  • From ANON - Lady Espelle on June 01, 2004
    Okay, I only read the second chapter and it does not look as if I am going to find the time to read more in the near future, so sorry for that...

    BUT I absolutely had to review! OF COURSE you are german! I knew it tomenoment I read "Who is Paul anyway?"! I think it's 'Du Darfst' and that is definitely not an English brand, so I figured you had to be German. Or the joke was unintenional, which would have kinda put a damper on my fun....

    Anyway, I think your English is reagoodgood, and I could find no mistakes in your phrasing or such. Well, as you probably figured already that I am German, too, it is for you to decide if you take that as a compliment... Might be that we just make the same mistakes, non?

    I like your story in any case and I am mightily proud to see a German author who writes in English running around here! Keep going!

    ~Lady Espelle

    *Gott hat die Erde nur einmal gek
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on May 02, 2004
    That is how most first times are... or more like it anyway.
    I loved how Hermione was her bossy-boots self. Damn that book!
    I also appreciated the rousing 1 minute of love making that Severus managed with his below average 5 inches. It is too funny.
    Is there only 1 chapter left? Is it going to be the morning after? Will she demand satisfaction from him or will they just work on it together?
    Very curious to see what's next.
    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on May 02, 2004
    Some parts of this chapter were all too familiar *shudder.* Well done, that was horrible sex, poor Severus and Hermione. I await the next chapter, thanks.
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  • From ANON - caracinous on May 01, 2004
    Weil meinmeine Muttersprache so sehr liebe (und zu faul bin englisch zu schreiben-wie eben auch bei ff.net):
    Die Kapitel sind verdreht. O.o Du hast erst den Disclaimer und die Regeln, dann das 2. und dann das 1. Kapitel. Wollt ich nur sagen, falls es von den anderen Reviewern noch keiner getan hat. Sonst wieder ein sehr geniales Kapitel. Ich hab die ganze Zeit ein Bild im Kopf: Hermine und das Kamasutra Buch. *lol* Au
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