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Reviews for Fated To Be Tied

By : KatieVixen
  • From ANON - YO on April 11, 2004
    Please format your story. It's annoying to read.
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  • From ANON - Pallas on April 11, 2004
    This seems like a good start... Too bad the formatting was a little screwed up... But please, update!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2004
    wow this is a really good i love HG/DM fic especaily veela storys there arnt many out there and and if are not completed plaese update soon but change the fomattin becoz it was hard to read
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  • From ANON - ladie-CASH_MONEY on April 11, 2004
    Tis is really goood welll written i hope that u update soon there is onlyone bad thing about it which cab be aesilyy changed try and keep itin paragraphs be it wa hard to read having to scroll from left to write
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  • From ANON - Tsa on April 11, 2004
    Enjoyed the story. Need to work on the Formatting though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2004
    This is really difficult to read, I suggest you change your formatting, and to seperate quotes from different people.
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  • From ANON - chillkat on April 11, 2004
    this is so good i love it pleeez keep going for my sake
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  • From ANON - raven on April 11, 2004
    Going the veela route...I like that you made BZ/GW a part of this as well. So many do a DM/? and that's the story. Can't wait to see the chase. Nice job cutting the explanation from Prof. Dumbledore-lets us imagine and other characters reminise later to fill in the blanks. Can't wait to see how the others thought that little meeting went. Another prophecy? This should be interesting. Don't forget to run a quick spell check and grammar check-there were a splattering of places where the scene dragged because descriptions got a bit choppy. Otherwise, cut the text to fit the screen and this should be good. Do we get to find out why GW is not so upset (besides that fact that she thinks BZ is hot, of course)?
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  • From ANON - reader on April 11, 2004
    i look forward to reading the next chapter.


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  • From ANON - Machelle on April 10, 2004
    This is a different take on the Veela story. I think the boys should marry the girls.
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  • From ANON - psr on April 10, 2004
    Great start! Hopefully you can get the formatting fixed.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on April 10, 2004
    Hey, I just read your question, try typing your chapters on Microsoft Word, not the notepad program, and just simply cut and paste to the open window on this site, it works for me.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on April 10, 2004
    This is a good start, I like DM/HG pairings and the veela twist hasnt been used to often with them, Post more soon, you're on to something. Just try to fix the formatting, because it was difficult to read with it extending so far over.

    elementaldeity
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  • From KatieVixen on April 10, 2004
    Hi everyone, hope you liked my story. By the way, does anyone have any helpful hints on uploading my story? I just can't seem to get the text to wrap.
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