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Reviews for Fated To Be Tied

By : KatieVixen
  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2004
    hey, you havent upd thd this yet,
    when will you cause like its been awhile.
    love what you have
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  • From ANON - Jen_Jen on June 07, 2004
    HOt HOt! t! Good story I hope you update soon. I would like to be notified of any updates. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Jeannette on May 26, 2004
    please update

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  • From ANON - Wouldnt You Like to Know on May 14, 2004
    Please update im waitning on it. It seems like i have been waiting forever!
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  • From ANON - Jan on May 13, 2004
    update update update please
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  • From ANON - Disgruntled reader on May 12, 2004
    Hey you said an update should be coming soon, Where is it? I'm dying here lol.
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  • From ANON - moony _reader on May 10, 2004
    Oh my GOSH!!! Please keep writing this fic. It's a great plot idea and it is so freaking hot! I love how you describe their bodies grinding and thrusting against each other... a lot of writers ignore things like friction and sensation in their sex scenes and I think that that's what can really make or break a scene. Again, you're doing a wonderful job. And you've got Ginny and Hermione down to a "t." Ginny is so sensible and accepting of her fate and Hermione is scared and fighting... their reactions are very realistic. Good job!!!
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  • From ANON - Avatar0507 on May 07, 2004
    hey, i gotta admit at first i was a little skeptocal but i said what the hell, lets read it. usually i am not a fan of 'veela heritage' stories but i like yours. i am very interested in this one, so please post a new chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 07, 2004
    Loving the fic! I hope you update really soon. I love the veela approach, especially adding Blaise and Ginny into the story. Update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cat on May 07, 2004
    Hiiiii, tis me again lol..... I just wanna say that I hope things r ok n I cant wait 4 the next chappie, as u can prob tell lol, n I dunno if Im allowed 2 say this here but I have been reading the reviews n I hope u dont become disheartened writing this fic due 2 ppl like anon saying a stupid thing like the name zambini instead o zabini ruins the whole fic, I mean alls I gotta say 2 that is lololololololololololololololololol puhleeeaasseeeeee making a commente the that was sad in my opinion, so keep it up this is a great fic as the rest o the reviewers seem 2 agree xxx
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on May 06, 2004
    Wow... that was so good! I can't wait until you update. Is everything ok? I hope nothing too serious has happened.
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  • From ANON - Steph on May 06, 2004
    To be honest, I thought the first chapeter was a little weak. It didn't read well and felt rushed and out of character. I wasn't sure if I was going to like this fic, but it is really good. There are still some things I would change but I think the plot is exellent. I am eager to hear the next couple of chapters and I'm glad you'll be updating again soon.

    Hope everything is well with your family too. : )
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2004
    The name is Zabini, not ZaMbini ( what a retarded mistake -- it ruins the whole fic... sad )
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  • From ANON - morgana on May 06, 2004
    really re goo good. i ussually don't like draco with hermione but i f ind this one interesting. the domination and possesivness pf a veela is somthing i think hermione needs. she needs that strength and i think she will appreciate being appreciated. the only thing i cna suggest is it is a little unclear about pierce. eventually i figured out he tried to hurt ginny but it is a bit vague and some might not be able to infer what happened. since this is an obvious (but good) future plot with him trying somthing on hermione and her needing saving, i think you should have a little more detail on the incident.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on May 05, 2004
    I just read the first three chapters of this, and I think that you have a lot of good, raw material to work with here. I like how the relationship between Ginny and Blaise was started and the dynamic that you have created between Draco and Hermione. The two couples contrast nicely. There are a couple of things that I noticed, however. One, your grammar needs some a bit of work. Often, more than one person is speaking in one pargraph, words are misspelled or the wrong word is chosen, etc. These things are really easy to correct and refine, especially with the help of a beta reader. Two, you seem to have made veelas only be male which is not cannon with Rowling's work as she has female veelas. Is this piece an AU in that respect? Or are they also dominant in their relationships, etc? Working on these things will help the reader understand your story better and will improve his or her reading experience.

    Again, I think you have a strong, good plot going so far, and I cannot wait to read the rest of the story. Good luck!

    Jamie :)
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