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Reviews for THE PHOENIX

By : tas
  • From ANON - evil_vanessa on May 22, 2004
    Hey!

    I just ...ADORE all your stories. You are the best author and you are like a model to me. I have read all your stories and i don't have a favorite because they are ALL just more than G-R-E-A-T. You have a great style. If you will stop writing we will lose an incredible author. A mailing list ? I'm in! My email is evil_vanessa16@hotmail.com . I am waiting for your updates on both of your stories. I just love them :)))!

    XOXO,
    Vanessa
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  • From ANON - Blazing Fire on May 22, 2004
    You are my favorite Harry Potter writer. I just love your stories. I have read all your work with HG/DM. I have also printed them out to put in a book so that I can read them any time. I can't wait to see what you have in store for Phoenix. Could you please put me on your e-mail list. I haven't replied yet, because my computer has been having an attitude with me lately and I can't always reply. Can't wait to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - shauna1983 on May 20, 2004
    I just wanted to tell you that I absolutley love your stories. Seriously, I've read the ones on this site many times. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jules on May 19, 2004
    tas:

    Just when I come home from a cruddy couple of days there is 'The Phoenix' and is brightens my day. Enjoyed Draco figuring Hermione's secret out so quickly and that he has a secret of his own. Enjoyed the broom race and think it makes sense that Draco would win that. I wonder what will happen at their cycle race.

    But I must admit I am looking forward to the photo shoot - so reminiscent of "Forever Fantasy" - one of my favorites!

    Only one request - MORE SMUT! Your Draco & Hermione are very hot!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on May 19, 2004
    I was so happy that you updated so much in such a short amount of time. I have a problem with fragments too. But sometimes, they need to be that way. It is a statement, especially when you are writing from a certian characters point of view, thoughts are fragmented, sometimes it flows better with the fragments. I've seen it in many novels as well, so I know it is a technique used often. Keep up the good work.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - Molle on May 19, 2004
    Yo,
    Bloody good story, I'll try and review this in the order of chapters but if they're out of order i apoligize. and for any bad spelling.
    I hate to start with bad stuff, but the moine-harry break up did seem superficial, brief and unrealistic (i no the whoel story was but unrealistic break up sreally annoy me). The smut was a nice warm up for the plot and definately kept me reading waiting for some more.
    A very nice setup in the next few chapters to keep things moving and alsoexplexplain a few more character though processes and relationships.
    I read ur fight scene and i managed tllowllow it alright, as i've been doing karate for while and i know how people react in a fight. however some of my mates have read ur story and it completely lost them. i know it may seem perfectly planned out in ur head but putting it down on paper is a lot harder than is sounds. I liked it so plz don't feel disheartened by any whinging about it. On the note of the fight, in later chapters i wouldn't mind if u could plz smack the shit out of pansy a bit more. She annoys shitshit out of me and should be shot but i can't afford the bullets.
    Just to add a bit more smut to the story could u have a flash back of moine and the bikers (the one that always picks her up over his shoulder, i can't remember his name) fling or something. I dunno, use ur creativity and spice things up a bit.
    Every one seems to be a bit too nice about moine and draco getting together, could u plz put a bit more sniping in it just so u can have some more bitch fights.
    One thought that i had was a fling between one of the bikers and one of the teachers or something like that. It could be developed into a huge plot and there are many twist that u could do at the end of it.
    I hope u don't have the moine out of the movies in mind when u plan this in ur head. I just can't see her doing some of this stuff. One of the people iwould like to see you develop more is ron, coz he never seems to get any action.
    One of the best things about ur story is that ur characters are CONSISTANTLY out of character. unlike alot of other fics that i've read. Ur way with words is definately up there amoungst the best i've read.
    Plz don't end it in an "and they all live happily ever after" or "and one of them dies whispering the others name". Ur story's too good to be ruined like that.
    Feel free to ignore my ideas completely if u want as this is ur story and ur doing a great job.
    Molle
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  • From ANON - birdy on May 16, 2004
    soooooooooooooooooooo, how's the race going to go?
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  • From ANON - Shannon on May 16, 2004
    Once again, you have nailed it!! I love it but now I need a cold shower! Till next time!
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  • From ANON - sakura yamakawa on May 16, 2004
    oh gosh i love it!!! please write more! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

    i fucking love it!!! update soon please?!
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  • From ANON - Austin on May 12, 2004
    that story is great, really wonderful. I can't wait to find out what happens. Please wriore ore ..
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  • From ANON - Amie on May 12, 2004
    That is an awesome Story, please keep writing ... i can't wait to see what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on May 09, 2004
    Please update soon.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - Lana on May 07, 2004
    OH MY FREAKING GOD!!! I love your story, it's the best one that I've read so far. And I'm not talking about just Hermione and Draco stories I'm talking about every single Harry Potter Fan Fiction I've ever read...and believe me, that's quite a lot. I hope you keep writing it and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Julili on May 05, 2004
    Hermione n leather and riding a bike. Man can it get more sexy than that?
    You really have taken a step upwards tas! I love your sex scenes and your hermione!
    I can see in my head those pictures, damn! Too bad it ended with Harry but Draco, that bad boy!
    Cool figthing scene, althoug a little hard too imagine it in my head but i love the idea of Pansy getting what she deserves.
    Are we going to see some draco/hermione action on a biaybeaybe?
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  • From ANON - Jules on May 04, 2004
    FABULOUS!!!
    Kick-*ss Hermione beats the crap out of Pansy and her minions, stuffs Hufflepuff at Quidditch and then ties Draco up and f*cks him crazy! Holy Crap!
    Great smut and still an entertaining and original story. Can't wait for the races and the bets.
    I wait for more with baited breath.

    Jules

    *THUD*
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