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Reviews for Child Full of Grace

By : DivinePotter
  • From ANON - Aeolua on June 30, 2006
    I have to admit this much, it has potential. however, your grammer is horrible((I dont mean this is a mean way)) You simly need a BETA reader. If you would like one, consider me, if you will. If you would like to get in touch with me, my e-mail adress is:
    Noemi_in_the_moonlight@yahoo.c0m
    or
    WerewolfSky@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Savi2070 on June 18, 2003
    ok, I've read this thing a few times over, and I've never reviewed... my bad! Anyway, thing is, i think this story should be continued, this is the only fic I've seen where Harry has been treated in this manner, and I would like you to finnish the story. I think that on each of Harry's birthdays, things should get worse. By the time Harry gets to Hogwarts... Things are really bad. Someone who cares for him should "save" him. (However, this will require TIME, as many abused child writers often forget!!!) It should be someone like Snape (broody bastard assumes that Harry's homelife is just peachy, when he sees Harry contemplating to jump from the astonomy tower late one night, he is proved REALLY wrong!) or Sirius ( The man goes to Harry's house to see why he hasn't been recieving any letters one year... all of couse, done without Dumbledore's aproval... and he sees Harry... I dunno... dying or something.) Or someone equally close to Harry, and either loves him or feels a strong resposibility to him. That's just to kick up the drama... much more angst when they blame themselfs for not seeing the signs sooner. All-in-all, I happen to think this is one of the most imaginative angst-against-Harry stories ever writen, and I hope you can find the juce to finnish it up someday.
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  • From ANON - yumi_no_baka on April 03, 2003
    aiyaaa....
    email me next time u update
    *blushes*
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  • From ANON - Katie on March 30, 2003
    Hey, you need to get more Chapters. Something about when he goes to hogwarts, or however you spell it. ANd he's afried and people begin to wonder and all that shit, you know. PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY AND PUT MORE CHAPTERS UP! PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    KT

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  • From ANON - a reader on March 01, 2003
    A good story, I like the idea of Harry having this fear of men since he was little and why. Maybe for your next chapter you should jump ahead to the present day. Say that over the four years at Hogwarts, Harry learned to quell his fear a little, but then something triggers it and people find out. (Especially Sirius and Remus. You have to have those two in it somewhere). Anyway, please write soo soon.
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  • From ANON - Gryphon on February 18, 2003
    Waaaaa! Have his Godfather save him! Evil uncle...anyway happy endings are good! Happy ending please and a updaate!
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  • From ANON - Savi2070 on February 01, 2003
    aw... poor boy. Continue, it has an interesting (If a little perverted) storyline.
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  • From ANON - Mogli The Witch on February 01, 2003
    Hello,

    very disturbing story... But I'll not flame, you've warned after all.


    Very many children are regularly abused by their OWN parents.

    selfself cannot imagine how anyone could do something like that to a helpless child.

    But I know several woman that have survived such a torture in their childhood.


    I think that Harry as foster kid of Vernon and Petunia is in the same position as if he was their child.

    He only knows them, he don't even know at this time that their parents were wizard and witch, and what they did for him (the

    sacrifice his mother did for him).


    The Dursley's hate him, but he depends on them totally. And therefore its (in my opinion) equally terrible as if his own father

    did those things.


    Because Vernon Dursley may not be his father, but he is the only father-figure Harry has in his life - and a abusive, terrible

    one.


    I hope no one of those who is writing or reading here had to bear such abuse.



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