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Reviews for Returned

By : draconisdemented
  • From ANON - TrixRStrange on September 22, 2004
    As a faithful reader of Unexpected I decided that your other works had to be read as well. I laughed, I cried, I linked to others! Brilliant, right on and hell yeah! Keep up the writing and on to the next FF!
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  • From ANON - viviane v.c. on July 23, 2004
    Wow!!!! This story is simply WOW!!!! I read it the third time, and it
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  • From ANON - raven on May 11, 2004
    Hm...interesting idea. Are you going to leave it there or take it anywhere else? Only real complaint I have is thpse pse from the final battle to the return-hard to believe that 30 Death Eaters could be hidden for that long without someone screwing up-especially if they were trounced so badly at the final battle. A year or two perhaps, but I can't believe that a force that large could maintain itself so long without discovery of some kind. Otherwise excellent story!
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  • From ANON - Coincidence Casualty on May 02, 2004
    Hey!

    It's me again. I've read your story again and it's still great. Since I'm not as overwhelmed as before I've noticed some mistakes in your story. There are inconsistencies in the POVs sometimes. And some sentence structure and phrasings are quite awkward. Grammars and spelling mistakes are also present through out the story. Nothing that can't be fixed without a beta. However, there's a big glaring, gaping hole where one moment Charlie is talking about dragons in the Weasley kitchen during Christmas (Ron's POV) and next, he's miraculously one of the survivors that was believed dead by the Weasley clan and the whole wizarding community. I know they're magic and all buts iss is WAY out. Still a great story nevertheless. =0]

    CC
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  • From ANON - Coincidence Casualty on May 01, 2004
    Hey!

    Tis sis such a brilliant story! It made me on the verge of tears. The vivid description of war and suffering they have all gone through be it physically, mentally or emotionally is trully heart wrenching. I was left with an ache in my gut after reading this. I love how you've made Ron not hold on to the childhood grudge he had against Draco unlike some other war stories which claim that it was so hard to forget how Draco had taunted him in school. I guess it's really hard not to "worship" Draco after all he's done. Words cannot explain how great this story is. Dare I ask for more?

    Coincidence Casualty
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  • From ANON - redsugg on April 14, 2004
    THIS WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY I LOVED IT, THIS STORY ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY THIS IS A FANTASTIC WORK OF ART AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE PLEASE WRITE MORE FICS LIKE THESE.

    YOUR REALLY BIGGEST FAN
    KRISTLE
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