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Reviews for On the first day of Christmas

By : h0lden
  • From Shellnet on July 27, 2017

    Funny now that we know snap his whole reson for everything he dose is love so lovey snape is real snape i wish he would have got some happyness she would have been a grate match


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 17, 2004
    Awwww thats so damn sweet and romantic.

    I love happy endings.

    Yes, everyone has to melt the hard ass Snape to make a romance really work for us sentimental types...

    You did it in your angsty ficlet too. But do I complain about it? NOOO WAY! Its too darn good.

    If you are worried about things like characterization, you need to get a a collaborative beta and you will find your confidence improving. Now understand this advice is from soemone too chicke to write anything beyond a 100 word challenge. LOL
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 16, 2004
    Very sweet ending. I'm not a big fan of Snape getting too OOC but sometimes its nice.
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  • From ANON - amethystangel on May 15, 2004
    Somebody please kill those three!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 15, 2004
    If I was Hermione I would castrate those three. What the hell are they doing? Can't they leave her in peace for one minute and mind their own business. Now Severus is probably thinking she set him up. And she is going to be very upset because I'm sure he will start acting very cold towards her because he will be thinking she betrayed him in some way, when it was those 3 knucklheads.

    Please! I implore you update this soon.
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  • From SandraM on May 13, 2004
    Aren't you absolutely cruel to us! A Cliffhanger!!!!
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  • From ANON - Persia on May 13, 2004
    HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!! What a freaking cliffhanger!!!! I hope you update soon cause I almost wet myself!!!! Can't wait to see what his reaction is! Wonderful fic!
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 13, 2004
    ut-oh...

    evil cliffy

    LOL- drunk Albus
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  • From ANON - Persia on May 12, 2004
    Ooooo, you RAT!!!!! What a cliffhanger! Me want kissie! Me want to see Mione and Sevie kiss! Pwease? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on May 12, 2004
    Lovely story you've got . I. I've just finished reading the last few chapters and had a absolute great time laughing with the whole bit about the game of charades. Really creative, my friend. I hope to read more.

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 11, 2004
    its 111 degrees outside and I needed a winter tale.

    Entertaining and very cute.
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  • From ANON - Lady_Chaos on May 09, 2004
    I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. You had me laughing so hard with the butter-beer-in-Albus'-face, and Hermione's-kneen, tn, that I couldn't stop convulsing with laughter for a good 10 minutes after. Needless to say, both my cat and my fianc
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  • From ANON - amethystangel on May 08, 2004
    Man, oh man, crack up city. I've lovin' it!
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