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Reviews for The Puppet

By : aikidobrat
  • From ANON - Sleipner84 on November 23, 2005
    Ouh ouh.. Don't stop here, what ever you do, don't stop writing, I desperately want to read more. Do update soon. Good story so far.
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  • From AkumaKawa on June 25, 2005
    Interesting.
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  • From ANON - kd on January 23, 2005
    Hey, that was really good. I enjoy the plot. I love stories that start at the dursleys and then bring harry to the wizarding world broken. Keep writing, i will be checking lol. Ttfn. Kd
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  • From ANON - Jen on May 16, 2004
    Great start, please update.
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  • From ANON - remus J lupin on April 20, 2004
    hmm, that was okay, but there is alot more you could do with what you've got, and what's with all the question marks? maits its just my computer, but whenever someone talks its like this: ?Sorry aunt Petunia.?? why??? lol anywasy mabey its just my comptuer, that was okay but try to write in more depth next time and you need smoother transitions too
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  • From ANON - Mimiheart on April 17, 2004
    This story has a good start, but the formatting is messed up. Thare are ?s instead of ' s which is making it difficult to read.
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