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By : h0lden
  • From pstibbons on July 06, 2009
    best lines:
    "Was it?" Harry spat angrily at the Headmaster, his green eyes flashing. "Because of our cowerdice, Hermione is probably dead."

    "Listen here boy." he growled, "We've no time for your moral good tidings. Either you want your know-it-all friend to survive, or you want to play the hero of the day and have her killed. Your choice."

    Snape's eyes darkened if possible, and a flurry of emotions rose up within him. The once so trusting and kind Albus Dumbledore was now boldfaced accusing him of being in on the attack. He felt anger, guilt and a bit of offhanded hurt at the old man's accusations.

    "I almost killed 'em...'Arry...Ron...and probably 'Ermione.." he sobbed loudly, and Snape gritted his teeth. "I killed 'er. My lil Hermione...always tryin' to help."

    (I like the way Snape is the only sensible person around. Ron is incompetent, Harry is a egomaniacal naive delusional hero, Hermione is a fool for keeping them around as friends, Minerva is an ignorant old woman, and Albus never really trusts Severus when push comes to shove.)

    He had resignedly decided to as usual, do the right thing. No words could express his disdain or guilt from merely having once been attached the feared group.

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  • From TempestRuby on April 23, 2009
    I really wish you would finish this story.
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  • From LadyAlexiel on December 16, 2008
    I love this story! i can't wait until the next chapter is done!
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  • From Pookah on February 22, 2008
    please in chapter five it is Transpire, not conspire. Transpire means to happen. Events transpire: as in "what transpired here tonight." People conspire, they plot and plan together.

    By he way, I think your Snape is very much in character so far. He is, acording to JKR, not a nice man at all.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - toya on December 25, 2006
    pls pls pls pls pls plspls plspls finish this story just so bloody well written great plot and story line i love it pls pls tell me you will finish it pls
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  • From ANON - ~*~Tasha~*~ on December 20, 2006
    I know that it has been a long time since you've updated this story, but I'm hoping that it is completed somewhere. IF you have more of this story, or you plan to continue it ... or not ... please email me and let me know tasha@timelessrose.net I really want to see what else happens.
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  • From ANON - shay (jracklesfan77) on August 08, 2006
    I have really enjoyed reading it and look forward to more. Snape was a right bastard at the start and I was happy to see him finally see Hermione's pain and in turn open his heart a little. Funny how once the door cracks open and lets in the tiniest sliver of light, the entire room that was once ensconced in darkness is visible. Well done. Dumbledore's death rattled me and I want revenge!! You can't just leave me hanging, with 3 teenagers on a kamikaze (sure as hell seems that way!) mission and not knowing what's to come of Snape, whether or not he's going to be forced to hurt the woman he finally realized and admitted to loving, and of course, how the defeat of that ugly snake bastard will come about! Or if it will at all! (I don't care if it's a happy or sad ending, so long as there is a good one!)

    Thanks for sharing! Hopefully you'll grace us with more of your creative brilliance - I WANT MORE!

    ~Shay
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 08, 2005
    Oh this is absolutely sinful so far. Loving it. Great Snape characterization!
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  • From ANON - angel on August 10, 2005
    i just love your story please update it soon i cant wait to read what will happen next and i hope it wil be a happy ending ... well in till next time later

    angel
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  • From ANON - tygress on June 29, 2005
    Are you ever going to finish?
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  • From ANON - tygress on March 28, 2005
    I love this story and check it daily...are you going to finish it?
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  • From ANON - Miari on March 14, 2005
    Oh GODS! PLEASE update soon! I just found this story and got totally sucked in. I just HAVE to know what happens next!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update! This is nerve wracking! TOO well written to leave it hanging like this!
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  • From ANON - me on March 14, 2005
    UPDATE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! WANT MORE! I NEEEEEEEEED MORE!!! -dies- this is such an awsome story! I love this sotry so much, please write more!!
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