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Reviews for The death of a git, the rise of a hero...

By : h0lden
  • From ANON - scorpion on May 01, 2004
    It's very enjoyable to read a SS/HG marriage fic that doesn't have a compliant acceaccepting Hermione.
    Hermione's firey attitude is wonderful and you've caught Snape's gittishness very well.
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  • From ANON - Nebula on April 28, 2004
    ....Wow, I kind of love this. My only suggestion would be to throw in someool ool reactions--There are more students at Hogwarts than the Golden Trio and Ginny. Other than that, keep updating!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 27, 2004
    How is this going to turn into something more? Seems near impossible. Interesting. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - moxie on April 26, 2004
    This is not a badly written story, but you may want to doublecheck your word choices... a number of words in this story don't mean what you seem to think they mean. For example, "...Good intentioned moral tidings," when Harry confronts Snape about Hermione's disapanceance. You used that to mean wishes or thoughts, but it really means news or information. Good tidings is good news, not good intentions. There are a number of other little mistakes like that; it's always possible to figure out what you mean, but it winds up making the story seem less polished. Would you like me to beta your vocabulary in this story? I wouldn't mind.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 23, 2004
    thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Pearle on April 21, 2004
    I have been reading "death" over at L&LS but my computer refused to let me in today. Your Snape is amazing. He really has such a childish quality to his actions, much as Snape in the book has as opposed to fannon Sn I h I have enjoyed your other works and look forward to future updates when Snape and Hermione, um, get along."Hermione'll get caught all right..but in a different type of bind. (hint.)"
    With any luck, this will be what I think it is. I anxiously await chapter 20.

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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 20, 2004
    For a minute there I thought you killed Hagrid. Well Severus is off to save Hermione, should be scarey fun. thanks.
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  • From ANON - evilarachnead on April 20, 2004
    GO GO GO WOOOHOOO!!! keep up the good work, u have me hooked! *happy face*
    ~Arachnead
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  • From ANON - Oes on April 20, 2004
    Hagrid is sooooooooooooooooooooo stupid! "Oh I almost killed them"
    Okay I don't like him, I think it obvious.
    But I want to see our sexy Snape save Hermione.
    So please A next chapter would be wonderful!!!!!! :)
    Orestes
    (y foy for my english I 'm french)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 18, 2004
    Oh no! I hope Hagrid is under imperious or something, he just can't be bad. thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 18, 2004
    Some consistency problems and her age, I don't agree with her being older. Hard to tell what year she is in - end of fifth or end of 6th? Again if it is fifth her age is really wrong. I liked the two other stories of your's I have read, good luck to you and thanks.
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