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Reviews for You Can\'t Go Home

By : AleathaRowland
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 30, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - linda on July 13, 2005
    I really like this story please hurry up and update.

    best wishes
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  • From ANON - Corki on May 01, 2004
    pleasdatedate soon i love this story and your style of writing is maybe one of the best i have seen in a while
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  • From ANON - DMS on April 28, 2004
    In review #1, I visualized Hermione in biker chick garb as a way of saying "Up yours, I'm outta here." After chapter 2, I see that Snape was not keeping her cooped up for fun. He was keeping her safe. Their relationship is . . . distant. I'm not surprised they don't have kids; are they man & wife in name only?

    Looking forward to seeing things warm up. Maybe biker chick garb would help.
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  • From ANON - jeslyn_nighthawk on April 28, 2004
    I'm intrigued. I'd love for your chapters to be longer, but I know how hard that can be. If you are still looking for a beta, I'm always free to read, though lord knows I neve find time to write anymore. my email is jeslyn_nighthawk@hotmail.com, and if you are interested in reading any of my writing, as a sort prelim interview, my author pages are at http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=349135 and http://www.lordandladysnape.net/viewuser.php?uid=736 . The first has all of my fanfics to date, and the second has the first several chapters of my only SS/HG to date.
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  • From ANON - crudedly on April 28, 2004
    interesting way to go. Can't wait to read more of it, pleaseate ate soon!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 28, 2004
    I'm intrigued. I'm curious though, the marriage law was enacted to replenish the wizarding population. How is it they don't have any children after 11 years? Or have we just not met them yet? Thanks for the update, very interesting.
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  • From ANON - shaz on April 28, 2004
    this story is great, i love the idea of starting the story at the 'end' of the marriage, its different and i cant wait to read more, please update soon
    hugs shaz
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  • From ANON - Rebelipuff on April 28, 2004
    Completely understandable, I'm working on finishing up my semester as weactuactually, I should be studying for my experimental final that is tomorrosteastead of reading this....ahh, the joys and follies of procrastination). I do have to say that Severus was a bit different in this than what I expected....it just seened to me that Hermione was so miserable in the beginning that there was more happening in the marriage than that polite ignorance and avoidance that came about, although in retrospect I like that a lot better than Snape being an ass. Why couldn't Hermione go to University again? Did I miss that? Or was that a precaution against Deatheaters? Did she rarely leave the house at all, then? I'm intrigued.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on April 28, 2004
    I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - DMS on April 25, 2004
    Hermione's breakfast attire: Do-me boots. Leather micro-mini. Navel ring in Gryffindor colors. White 'n' tight tube top, sans bra. Hair wild, free and glorious (to match the boobs). Would a bomber jacket be too much?
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  • From TeaRoses on April 20, 2004
    Oh, an excellent take on the challenge! I really want to read the rest of this, I can't wait to see how it turns around into being SS/HG... and I love the realization that their married life might not be happy and loving (not the tack I took in my own fic, but perhaps a better one). I really hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - kimsama on April 20, 2004
    Wow, this is such a unique perspective from which to come at the challenge! I hope that the rest of the story is as well-written as this part! I can't believe what a tease the first part is, and then to have a completely unhappy Hermione married to a dominating Snape...this is going to be great. I'm wondering where the story will take the characters now, since there's such an obvious lack of emotion between Hermione andpe. pe. Is Snape going to be the cold villian that JK writes him as early in the books or the shaded, troubled man of later books, with an exterior as cold as Siberia and a twisted sad core?

    Please please PLEASE write more! ^^
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  • From ANON - mchellin78 on April 19, 2004
    i like this unique avenue to this challenge. although i'm a bit surprised to see hermione so complacent. i can't imagine HOW snape got her to wear only black robes and do her hair a certain way. she just doesn't seem like the kind of gal to submit to such things. but i'm really looking forward to seeing more of this story. theythey got together, how their relationship has been and what will happen now that the marriage act is being repealed.
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