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Reviews for Hermione and Snape and Umbridge

By : HarryPotterfanatic
  • From BlondeChick718 on June 26, 2008
    i liked it alot..hmm..i dont know wut should happend..maybe Umbridge get into her dormitory and snape be waiting outside..idk..your the author..keep up the good work!! ;-D
    XOXO..byezz
    **L!zz!e**
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ? on July 11, 2005
    ?????
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  • From ANON - tygress on May 23, 2005
    So, when is the new chapter going to be up?
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  • From ANON - on May 21, 2005

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  • From ANON - . on May 19, 2005
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  • From HarryPotterfanatic on February 27, 2005
    I'm so sorry guys. It has been a while since I posted up a new chapter but the third chapter isnt finished yet, so you will have to wait longer. Sorry, but I am glad people are reading it.
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  • From ANON - Reincarnate on February 26, 2005
    My advice to you is to spell check your work before you post it. As for your needing help. I'd simple suggest That Umbridge has some sick obsession with Hermoine and some how Snape got mixed up in it and is trying to protect her in his own way. Atleast thats the vibe I'm gettting from the story. Good luck.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on January 04, 2005
    Too bad it was marked as a Hermione/Snape story. It would've made a good Harry/Hermione. U could've had him trying to figure out what was going on, as he hates Snape and Umbridge anyways. God I dunno why she has to be in it anyways. Hope she dies. Anyways u could have Harry figure it out and burst in and be the hero. Sorry, I'm a big romantic, well kinda. Anywas seeing it's a Hermione/Snape one, eww, I would suggest u make it seem he is under control by Umbridge, she's just a sadistic cow anyways so maybe u could say she was just turned on by it and wanted her turn to humiliate Hermione. Myabe Snape could break out of it while hurting her in the next chapter and they form some sort of friendship, going into more? I dunno. Just a suggestion. Hope I helped.
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  • From ANON - tygress on December 30, 2004
    I've really enjoyed this and found it interesting and unique. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 23, 2004
    Well... It was odd ! I do not like so much the idea of Herm being rapped but if the next chapter Hermione 's becoming more willing so yes, i want read the next chapters !


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  • From ANON - sarah on August 01, 2004
    Wow! this story is great. i love it so far. whats gonna happen with Umbridge? i hope she gets caught in her own game. that would be hilarious. please please please finish. it is addictive....
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  • From Crystal56 on July 18, 2004
    Maybe you could have Hermione pregnant??? (With Snape's kid or something) and then you just go from there. If you need a beta reader, e-mail me!
    katy@rjgross.com!

    Love the story and I can't wait to seee! Ce!
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  • From ANON - iproofreadu on July 18, 2004
    You need a beta or something because your spelling and grammar are terrible.
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  • From ANON - proofreader on July 18, 2004
    You need a beta or something use use your spelling and grammar are terrible.
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