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By : Pegasus21
  • From ANON - Kelly on May 19, 2004
    I was really hoping that Draco would be able to get his mother away safely. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jade on May 18, 2004
    What will Lucius do? And is Severus, Narcissa's mate?
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on May 17, 2004
    No, I didn't think Ginny was a doormat. I just didn't understand her motivation. Sorry if I'm being tough on you... I really like this fic and I want to see the spunky, rough n tumble Ginny I see in the books. I'll try not to be so difficult from now on.
    Thanks for having Ginny ponder all the questions that I had.
    I KNEW IT! Narcissa's lover was supposed to be Snape. He seems a little bitter. How did she betray him?
    Why is Hermione so sad? Why didn't anyone notice?

    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - autumnphilia on May 16, 2004
    hmmm...chapter nine is awfully brutal, as well as the requests he makes of Dumbledore et al pretty unreasonable. I doubt if they would agree, or, honestly, allow Draco to force Ginny to be his mate. Now, Ginny is a Weaseley, a strong and proud woman herself, from a family of strong proud people. What he did to her in chapter nine would probably make her hate him, not be interested in him. Unless this is going to devolve into a rape fic, ewww, then is seems likely that Ginny will ask for protection from Draco, and Dumbledore will give it. In ch nine Draco hexes her, calls her a whore, bites her severely, not a love bite, but an animal bite, manhandles her, threatens her and terrifies her, I'm betting, since GINNY IS NOT A DOORMAT, she'll consider the quality of her life as his mate and possibly cut him loose. Of course, then he will try to win her back. But please don't turn Ginny into a girl who will accept that sort of behavior, or Dumbledore into a man who would allow a collegue to be abused. It is really very OOC.
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  • From ANON - raven on May 15, 2004
    Hmm...from an emotional perspective that was excellent-looking forward to a bit of balance when Ginny comes out of her shock in the next couple of chapters. As for problems within the scene, it was a bit unclear when Narcissa takes her to Draco's room that she leaves-had to read that a couple of times to make sure she slammed the door with her in the hall. Other problem-midway through when Draco was biting Ginny's neck and you mention something to the extent of the beating of her life faltering it's almost like he is temporarily a vampire. Was he nibbling, drawing blood, biting but not breaking skin...? A bit confused there. As for coming up next-please, please, please tell me Ginny's just in shock-personally, insanity or not, I would be apperating or on the first train out as far as I could go-followed by whatever transportation got me away. From her earlier reactions-she may be a bit kinder than I, but she doesn't seem to be too thrilled about this either. (All yummy goodness aside, of course.)
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  • From ANON - Aine Rowan on May 14, 2004
    Whoa! That was intense. You are gifted at drawing the reader into the story. It's strangely fascinating. While I am not one to only likeffy ffy stuff, I can appreciate mutual passion just as well as anyone. But this borders abusive, yet I haven't been offended (yet). I can honestly say, I can't wait until you update.
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  • From ANON - Aine Rowan on May 14, 2004
    Poor Draco, he has absolutley no control over his own life does he?

    The story is, so far, intriguing and quite entertaining
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  • From ANON - reviewer on May 14, 2004
    *gasps* OMG, that was so good, *bows down to your ability to create an awesome fic* I need an up date soon before I go through withdrawls hehe :)
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  • From ANON - cat on May 14, 2004
    OMG woooooooooowwww, that chapter was amazing, i love the way he is still a bastard but needs her badly, its something that i have never seen done in a veela fic n is original n i love it, pre presently fanning my self 2 cool off, this story has just become one o my favourites, the physical scenes are excellent and add to the fire in their relationship which is 1 o the things that seperates this fic from a lot o fics, u have a really good imagination........ "she was positively vibrating with energy. Like one of those Muggle electrical wires" ........lol i love it, I have no talent for writing n lil quotes like that just shows what a good writer u r in my opn. in. it seems 2 me that this story improves as it goes along n since it is on the amazing level now im dying 2 see what comes next. I am buzzing u r doing another veela fic n I cant wait 2 read it but please dont lose interest in this fic coz that is what a lot o authors do when they start a new fic, :D i do hope that the lion in ye new fic is hermione draco/hermione r defo my best fics but saying that this 1 has defo over run a lot o fics i have read, ppllleeaassseeeee 4 the love of god update soon, ill b checking everyday, so put me out o my misery xxx
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  • From ANON - Kelly on May 14, 2004
    The chapter turned out perfect....Draco is being an ass but that's Draco. Now I think that Ginny should devise a punishment for Draco...any thoughts? Please hurry and update. I will say this again, I am first and foremost a H/G shipper but I just love this story!!!! But I will take what I can get on this website b/c H/G is so hard to find here. Keep up the good work and please update quickly.

    TTFN
    Kelly

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  • From ANON - deesdresdragon on May 14, 2004
    He called her a whore? I just don't see her taking that without punching him in the face. Okay, he got a knee to the groin. But with 6 brothers, I'd expect Ginny to be able to knock the shit out of Draco. Just not seeing her cower to him. Is she supposed to want him, but denying herself? Maybe you could have her ponder that more.
    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on May 10, 2004
    Great Chapter....I love the charms that Draco put on Ginny. I can't believe I'm liking this story I am a true H/G shipper. It must just be that the story is so good. Update soon and I'm sticking my tounge out at you, I have two more weeks before finals...can't come soon enough I need a break.

    Good LuckYou
    You
    TTFN
    Kelly
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  • From ANON - cat on May 04, 2004
    Im loving this fic, at first I wasnt 2 sure bout it coz I thought it was a foa focus more on dracos other pros wis with his family than on his mate (due to the original first chappie, which im glad u have changed btw) but u have proven me wrong, it is interesting 2 see that he is still argumentative with her but still has his need for her which is turning out good, ive been keeping up with this fic since the beginning (lol i actually check everyday 4 updates), there is just not enough sexy drveelveela which is not slash fics out there (i actually kno know of 3 decent ones n this is 1 of them) n im extremely pleased I have found this fic, i also love the way u update occasionally which is good so ppl dont lose interest in the story (lol thats my way of saying update :D), theres nowt worse than waiting 4 a good story to update (:D). it will b interesting 2 see how this fic works out n im hoping that u delve in2 the veela courting rituals a bit like katievixen has done with fated to be tied, i luv the 'i need u ur mine' scenarios draco has in veela fics lol.........yes im obsessed with veela draco.......yyuuuummmmmmmmm, n im v v v surprised that not many ppl other than the ones who write slash have picked up on it, maybe they aint aware of it, i only discovered it bout 6 months ago n ive been lurking in hp ff 4 a year now, spread the word i say, devote ur ff author life 2 writing draco veela fics i say (noash ash lol)..........feed my addiction, us poor helpless ppl who cant author squat depend on authors like u 2 feed our obsessions lol so pleeeeeeeeeaaaassseeee put us out o our misery n update, like............... erm........nnnnooooowwwwwwwwwww :D xxx
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  • From ANON - Kelly on May 02, 2004
    I am a hardcore H/G shipper but I love this story. Good luck on finals and update ASAP!!!!

    TTFN
    Kelly
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  • From ANON - DemonQueen17 on May 02, 2004
    MORE, MORE, MORE !!!! I can't wait to read more of this fic. Please update soon.
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