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Reviews for Lost Souls Found

By : LisaSeuferer
  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on June 14, 2005
    If you aren't a closet Trekkie, I'll eat my collection. There are far too many Spockisms for coincidence!
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on June 14, 2005
    Another homonym: it's "set your sights" as in using a telescope or astrolabe to aim your attention, not "set your sites" as sites are locations. Great story, by the way: did I mention that?
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on June 13, 2005
    Just another note about homonyms:

    Discrete means in separate, individual pieces

    Discreet means in an unobservable or not-calling attention manner.

    A very common error, but maddening.
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on June 13, 2005
    Enjoying this story as much as its predeceasor, but I must point out that it is "free rein" as in horses, not "free reign" as in kingship. Other than that, its just perfect.
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  • From ANON - Lady Claire on June 13, 2005
    Help! I just finished reading chapter 40 and well, there is no next one posted. Why oh why do I have to wait now? Well, at least I was told you update very often. How many chapters are there going to be anyway? It still looks to me as though there are still a million questions to answer.
    Anyway, about this chapter. I loved that part at the end. I think if Harry continues like this, Severus might be forced to consider him an Honorary Slytherin one day as well.
    I hope Severus and Harry won't kill each other.
    And of course that Sev (don't let him kill me) and Rowena get together and that they adopt Katrina... Well, I guess you realize that I'm hoping for a fairy tale ending.
    Oh, and could you send me an e-mail when the next chapter is up? That way I won't have to check this page everyday. Though I suspect I will still check it like every second day.

    Lady Claire
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  • From ANON - Lady Claire on June 13, 2005
    [Chapter 38-Changing perspectives]
    Little kids are just soooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute. Especially when their name is Katrina. In Germany we have a saying: "Kindermund tut Wahrheit kund." It means that children often say the truth, even if it sometimes makes people uncomfortable. I think the English version is "Out of the mouth of babes". Anyway, this chapter reminded me of this. When she told him that 'pologizing means to say you're sorry, I howled with laughter. I think any Gryffindor would give a lot of money to have heard THAT!
    Anyway, the next chapter is calling me. I hope he follows her advice.

    Lady Claire
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  • From ANON - Lady Claire on June 12, 2005
    The end to this chapter was soooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet! I nearly cried!
    Anyway, I though that idea with Dumbledore and the boxes was really wonderful, too!
    So well, now I will continue reading.

    Lady Claire
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  • From ANON - Lady Claire on June 11, 2005
    Well, now I have read the first 12 chapters of your story and I thought I just drop a couple of lines.
    I read your post on reviewing at glassreflect. That was very good work, too. I only found this story because you had linked it there. (By the way, I usually review after reading all of the story that is posted at the time, and then after every chapter that gets updated. I think it's kind of stupid to wait for the author to finish the whole story, as he or she is less likely to finish it, if there are no reviews.)
    Anyway, about this story. It just great! I love your characterizations. Somehow you manage to make Severus believeable unpleasant, nasty and yet loveable. It's very well done indeed. Also I like Rowena and Katrina. Somehow I'm hoping for the two of them to get married and adopt the little one. That would be too wonderful, and I guess a little fluffy as well, like some kind of fairy tale.
    Is the story already finished?
    Well, I'll continue reading on tomorrow. It's half past twelve at night in germany right now.

    Lady Claire
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  • From ANON - witte heks on June 09, 2005
    I've just read your 'essay' about reviews, and you are so right .I must admit I don,t always leave a review, because I find it sometimes quite hard to find the right words to say.And just leaving a 'great story,I really enjoyed it 'seems so short and abrupt.Now I've read your E-mail about reviews I will endeaver to do so more often.
    Please don't think your writing sucks, I think your writing is wonderful. I don't usually read WIP's because I don't like to be dissappointed when the story has been abandoned . Your updates have been regular and I find great pleasure when I go to my PC and find a message that LSF has been updated.My husband must think I'm quite nuts. I truly wish I could write like you do! Please continue to write stories like LSF .I'm always looking forward to the next chapter.

    LOL Ann.


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  • From ANON - druidfaerie on June 08, 2005
    WOW! What an excellent story thus far. The first kiss was fantastic. I look forward to reading on. Lovely work, dear!
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  • From ANON - Anrell on June 06, 2005
    It has taken me some time to get this far in the story but it is well done in my opinion. I have read a lot of fan fiction and everyone has thier own style. The key to a good story is to make it rich in text to fix the readers imagination in your world. You do a great job - a bit idealistic with love and forgivness but it is OK with me. Fantasy is just that! You (the writer) are welcoming us into your world and those who enter it (the reader) should be respectful of that just as they should be when walking into your home! I like this story and the emotions it envokes and the images it creates so please keep the muse happy!
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  • From ANON - Fluffy,the 3 headed cat on June 03, 2005
    This last one is a wonderful chapter. Maybe this is the best so far.
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  • From ANON - alphalpha:) on June 02, 2005
    Here, reading.
    I love this story..
    fascinating how fast you work.
    I preferred the bitter-type Sev, but this version is also god to read about.
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  • From ANON - revolsepans on June 02, 2005
    Powerful chapter, really advanced the story on several levels. Merlin's beard, I want more of this story!!! but of course waiting patiently. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Maria on May 20, 2005
    Wonderful wonderful!! can't wait for the next chapter x
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