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By : LisaSeuferer
  • From shellylynnc on May 14, 2004
    Surprising and intereg tug turn of events. Snape loves her. Awe. Smut ahead, goody.
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  • From ANON - Jake\'s Wench on May 12, 2004
    THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ!!! And I have read over a hundred, mostly Snapefic. I prefer the Snape/OC stories and this really is so well done. You have obviously done a great deal of writing before to have such a tight, intense and descriptive writing style. This is a very believable Severus with wonderful psychology. One request. I have noticed that all these fanfics have both parties seeing "fireworks" the first time and every time during the lemon scenes. Since the rest is so believable, I would love for that aspect to be developed over a few lemon scenes also. Anyway, I'll be saving your whole story in my computer when it's complete for further reading and will keep checking on your further writing. (I still think you are a published author. You are too polished not to be.)

    Every one else...while you are waiting for updates on this fic, I can recommend two other well written Snapefics available on Fanfiction.net: Whole Again, Severus (also Whole Again, Remus and Whole Again, Sirius) and The Other Side of Darkness.

    Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - cookyjar on May 10, 2004
    I really like your story so far. it really show the souls of caracters and loooks fitting to the cannon. one thing snaged me though was how could harry possibly know what potion snape was brewiith ith his blood. all he should know is that some death-eater women asked for it and maybe connect it to katrina. in my mind there should be countless potions that use blood
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  • From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on May 07, 2004
    I wouldn't worry too much about the flames from that certain individual. Some people just enjoy flaming for no reason. I'm inclinded to think this is one of those case since he/she/it is appearently willing to flame you on two different sites over the same story.

    And that's just redundant and stupid.

    You are a great writer and you shouldn't let this ninny bother you. I know this is an easy thing for me to say cause I didn't just receive a flame (but I do know they suck immense You Your story is good and is worth the read, so don't get any doubts about that. I have spoken! Now get on with the next chapter. ;)


    hugs,

    Padfoot.

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  • From ANON - Claribel on May 07, 2004
    Wow! What an exciting chapter. Glad Katrina was safe. I'm still enjoying this story - you write it how you want to - I've read all the books several times and have seen nothing contradictory - this is fiction after all, and you can write your own world. Flamers are quite common on FFN I bel, so, so just ignore them.
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  • From ANON - sweetelysium on May 07, 2004
    This story is wonderful -- I love anything that attempts to give Snape humanity. Of course, it helps enormously that I always have Alan Rickman stalking through my head, uttering things in that beautifulbeautiful voice . . . oh, melt. Not that your Snape needs that help! Anyway, I especially like the whole fatherly angle. Snape has always struck me as more bluster than balls (apologies for the phrase) when it comes to not caring about things and inside he just desperately wants to care and be cared for. And he is! Fantastic!

    And it totally sucks that you've got some bint harping on your grasp of canon -- you're creating your own world and you should be able to branch out as much as you like. It's not as if you don't have a firm grasp of canon, anyway. I don't see any Mary Sues prancing about. You're doing a great job witis sis story. Ignore him/her/it; they're totally not worth the sweat if they can't respect the time and effort you've poured into this.

    Rock on.
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  • From AntagonistLen on May 06, 2004
    Very glad to have gotten to the story here :D
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  • From ANON - Fire n Ice on May 04, 2004
    You are a wonderful writer whether or not the "muse" is cooperating! I love your story and I put it on my recommended reading list. You develop your characters wonderfully. Please keep it up! I know how hard it is to update frequently but please try!
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  • From ANON - Claribel on May 03, 2004
    What a great read this has been so far - took me a while, but it was worth it (and the prologue too). I really like your characterisations, and your plot is interesting and compelling. Hope you update soon.
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  • From shellylynnc on April 25, 2004
    First off, I loved the cowboy and Snape's reaction to that redneck. I think this last chapter went fairly well all in all. It's not quite as fluid as the others I'll admit. Personally I find that getting it on the page is the easy part, while reading and re-reading, catching and correcting the small details that make a great story even better, that's the hard part. I'm at the end of my story on fanfiction and I don't think I ever posted a chapter on the same day I wrote it. Hopefully I've completely forgotten it the next day so I can be more critical, catch those small things. Like you said it's the small nit picky things, "put a comma before that 'and' not a period"...You are doing great. Four kids? For your sake I hope most of them are in school. I work full time and have a two year old, boy am I lucky to get any time to write...Best of luck to you. Shelly
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  • From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on April 25, 2004
    Ha! *rubs hands together* I
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 24, 2004
    Okay, I'm up to chapter 14. I am glad that they finally kissed in chapter 10. It seemed like FOREVER! Your Snape really hates himself. Alot. So what is next for these cautious lovers?
    I will catch up the last of it tomorrow.
    Cheers.

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  • From ANON - Gypsy on April 22, 2004
    Hello,
    Just read chapter 15 of this story and have to say that its a very intriguing story, full of plot-twists, lovely characterizations and interactions, and the chemistry between Rowena and Severus is entertaining. that 'little bloodthirsty Ravenclaw' is just a good match for our snarky potions master....but of course have to keep in mind that Ravens ARE not only scavangers but also Prdators to some birds and animals. this story with her developing counter curses got me thinking.....would a curious intellictual like Rowena think about trying to produce a counter for the Killing Curse? she'd have to do it in Secret most times, though being where she is now, she could probably tell Albus and Severus about it but who knows. Can't wait for term starts, I hope she will be able to put both Potter AND Malfoy in their places proving that she is indeed neutral.
    ohh well nice chatting with you, hope you bring alot of chapters out soon.
    Until then keep up the great work

    Gypsy.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 22, 2004
    Okay, I only got through chapter 4... I need to get some sleep.
    I really like this story and I am going to recommend it to some of my pals.

    Rowena isn't a Mary Sue and I like that. I like the fact that she has faults. Will teaching Hermione change her mind about muggleborn students? I'm sure that you answer that in the next few chapters.
    I think Rowena idolizes Severus a bit. Sees him through rose-colored glasses. I like how she doesn't behave for the most part as Severus expects. Throws him a little. It's fun.

    I'll read more tomorrow and review again.

    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 21, 2004
    Shanti... my first piece of advise is to post slower. Post a chapter a day or every other day. It builds up your readership. Also, people don't have time to read the first 14 chapter in one day. I am currently reading chapter 2 of the prologue. I will read this over the next few days.

    Cheers.

    PS Up to chapter 2 of the prologue is very good. I like the background to the Lupin family.
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