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By : LisaSeuferer
  • From ANON - ABOURJILIE on August 10, 2005
    I TRULY HOPE YOU WRITE AGAIN. THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST FANFIC PIECE I HAVE EVER HAD THE PLEASURE OF READING.
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  • From ANON - Viorica Black on August 01, 2005
    This is an amazing story, Snape's character is stunning, in the last 4 chapters he is one of the most masculine , and matured Snapes of the fanfic-world. In the JKR HP Snape screams, he is in a tantrum sometimes, which I find very out-of-character. Your Snape is much more manful. JKR should read your fic to learn writing and style.
    I did not like so much the song-parts though, but even with them your novel was absolutely one of the best Snape-love-fics. The sex-descriptions were very classy. The Snape-Remus Lupin friendship was also one of my favourites, because you are the first who could make them friends without making Snape out of character. Little Engelchen was so sweet.
    Young mr. Sirius Lupin has the Dark Lord's eyes?... May I hope for a continue? :) Please? Please?
    Oh, and my favourite chapter... when Snape kills that young Deatheater woman in Malfoy manor... that is. Simply perfect. He is a professional murderer, a Deatheater, the Spy, the Hero, the Only Severus Snape.
    Congratulations.
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  • From ANON - ProspectKiss on August 01, 2005
    Howdy!

    First off, let me tell you how much I enjoyed your story. It was wonderful! Amazing! Brilliant!

    Ok, now for the more in-depth review. I have to admit, I was a little skeptical at first when I read the summary. Harry Potter stuff usually squicks me (they're kids!), I didn't think I was into Snape, and I usually don't like original characters. That said, the fact that it was 50+ chapters made me think that you probably put a lot of heart and soul into this tale, and so I gave it a whirl. Was I right! I think you have single-handedly converted me into a Snape-lover.

    I enjoyed all the characterization - in my opinion, you managed to keep the characters canon while still exploring your own vision (and that's a hard feat to pull off!). I liked Rowena, and was grateful that she wasn't a Mary Sue; she seemed very realistic within the Harry Potter world. I got a kick out of viewing Harry Potter himself through the eyes of Rowena and Snape, as well as viewing the relationship between Snape and Dumbledore in a more father-son light. As for Snape himself, well... he was very enjoyable! Snarky, sarcastic, witty, angsty, and yet very loving and passionate. It was so interesting for me to explore this character! And, as a Texan myself, Howard was fun to read as well.

    The plot was well thought-out and complex. It wasn't sappy, or overly dramatic, or fluffy - it was just right. Good pace, good twists, realistic resolution. Voldemort a muggle - HAH! My favorite chapters were "The Malfoy's Summer Fete" and "Secret Oaths and Commitments." What can I say, I'm a sappy romantic. I liked the idea of a Bond between Rowena and Severus, and I really liked the fact that you made it into an important plot point, and did not have it just as something sappy for the lovers. I also enjoyed the smut, too - hooray for lemon moments!

    All in all, this has been one of my most favorite pieces of fanfiction. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with the world! I'm looking forward to your next work.
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  • From ANON - June on July 21, 2005
    LOVED this story! I left feedback after reading about half, and now that I've finished, I have to leave more! This was wonderfully told, very imaginative and with lots of intrigue, danger and suspense. Thank you so much for the sweet, happy ending! A truly enjoyable fic that I will happily recommend to friends. Again, many thanks for hours of reading pleasure!
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on July 14, 2005
    Thanks for the lovely story! I saw your family picture; you have a lovely family, too. May they never give you grief!
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  • From ANON - Lady Claire on July 14, 2005
    It four minutes after midnight and I finally managed to finish your story. Less than 24 hours before HBP.
    Anyway, your story is one of the best I have read so far. I am still completely awed at the idea of turning Voldemort in a Muggle. It's just perfect. And the end was like a perfect fairy tale.
    I especially liked that one line at the end of the Honeymoon chapter: 'They both enjoyed desert.' or something like that. That line somehow told a lot more than four words usually do.

    Lady Claire
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  • From ANON - Lady Claire on July 14, 2005
    Chapter 53

    OMG!!!!!! I can't believe it! You are brilliant! BRILLIANT! Turning Lord Voldemort into a Muggle! I never read a fic with that happening before. Though you know, I think it is THE perfect punishment for him. They should let him live for a while. Anyway, I still have the last few chapters to read.

    Lady Claire
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  • From ANON - Mandi (loyalist_girl from lj) on July 14, 2005
    Fantastic, I like it far better then the censored version!
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  • From revolsepans on July 14, 2005
    Ahh...I'm boneless and sated. Thank you for such a great story and thank you for finishing before HBP! I can't wait to start at the beginning and read through it again to completion. Then I might have something more articulate to say. Congratulations! Best regards, Sally
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  • From ANON - anneluvsanimals on July 13, 2005
    Great Story. I'll be so glad when you finally post the rest of it. You are a sensational writer. Never stop. Smiles! Anne
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on July 13, 2005
    What a ride! Got caught up, finally. Can't wait for the finale, and then on to Book 6!

    Nice battle, and magical events. Some really scary incidents back there, too. Glad you aren't Voldemort!
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on July 12, 2005
    Hello again! Up to chapter 37. Really heavy going there.Hope all is well with you and yours. You sure know how to create conflict in your fiction.
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  • From revolsepans on July 05, 2005
    ALSO, even though I have hard time with Snape referencing pop music, I LOVE the songs, all the songs you've laced through the story. We must be close in age, because many of these songs have been important in my life. Bachelor party and wedding reception music was so much fun--GREAT. And I love it when Severus and Rowena dance. I have read the Malfoy's fete chapter over and over and over because of the dance scenes. Between this story and anticipating HBP, I can hardly sit still, I'm that excited!! Thank you.
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  • From revolsepans on July 05, 2005
    Wow, the last few chapters are beautiful and terrible all at once. I feel so much: heartache, tenderness, longing, resolve, horror, restlessness. And what a pleasure to see Severus permit himself the comfort of Rowena's embraces. I'm also glad to see the resumption of Katrina's role in the story-it really adds dimension to Severus' journey in relating to others. But, I'm having some trouble with the songs. Umm, hmm, I guess I have a hard time envisioning Severus Snape listening to pop music. (My Sevvie is more the Shakespeare quoting type.) However, if I can concede this possibility, I MUST admit that these are perfect songs for the emotions represented. (And before I hear it from everyone else about calling your story "terrible", look at all the definitions. Terrible: extremely formidable; extreme in extent or degree; intense. An example would be LOTR-Fellowship when after looking in the Mirror of Galadriel Frodo offers her the One Ring and she chides him for testing her: "In place of the Dark Lord you will set up a Queen. And I shall not be dark, but beautiful and terrible as the Morning and the Night! ... All shall love me and despair!") Lisa, sorry, there's a connection, really. This scene in LOTR book and movie is very powerful and I feel the same way about this story. Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Viorica Black on July 03, 2005
    I love your story so much!!!! This idea of Sev sending her songs seemed to be unlike of him first, than I got used to it, and now I find it romantic, and I'm glad that you made him more human. :) I like it.
    That idea with the fials as transformated food.. that's fantastic!!!! Wow.
    And the way you write about the war, and Sev's role in it... you are a genious.
    Breathtaking.
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