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Reviews for Love's Labours; Paradise Lost

By : Veresna
  • From ANON - Amanda on February 22, 2003
    This is getting better and better. Keep going. I am reminded of the old saying, "no good deed goes unpunished," and both Celia and Snape seem to be getting their share. Hopefully there will be a bit more hot sex and other stuff. And hopefully the nasty snakey Snape will reappeoon.oon. Well, after Celia is fully healed. hehehehehehe. Keep up the good work. You have a gift with our favorite greasy professor.
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  • From ANON - Frini on February 20, 2003
    Talking about Helena...where is she? WHere's SS sequel? Are you planning on writing it, I mean, do you already have a plot to develop? SOrry to push, but I realy love that fic, so...one can only hope to read more of it.

    As of Paradise Lost here...it might become Paradise Regained huh? There are so many possibilities to explore with these two, and I don't only mean sexually. The contrast between them is really good.

    Severus wasn't couting on the mirror. That was a nice touch and the book...MORE...I want to read MORE!!!!

    Love
    Frini
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  • From ANON - Kim on February 19, 2003
    You are a very good writer, your details, the way you get us into the characters is wonderful. While he did give her 5 orgasms, will she ever remember them? That is just not fair!!! I am still looking for those redeeeming qualities besides the great sex. I know you can not have everything but you can try! Thanks,
    Kim
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  • From ANON - Sassy on February 17, 2003
    That. Was. Awesome.
    Besides the story being wonderfully written (and tasteful, in a twisted Snape-like way), Snape was perfectly in character the whole time, which I applaud you for! I've read very few Snape fics where the author has suceeded in that. And I can't wait to read more of this. I liked the twist at the end, but it couldn't possibly end there, and I would have had my suspicions about the finality of the story even if you hadn't said it wasn't finished. ;) Only had you been an inordinantly cruel author would the story have ended there, and considering the little cunnilingus episode at the end (Hey mum, I learned a new word...!), I think it's safe to safe you're at the most *ordinantly* cruel. :grins:
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  • From ANON - Frini on February 16, 2003
    I can't believe he used obliviate!!!! BASTARD!!!! I can't...believe...oh God....That was a twist, Trisha....just to make me more curious....
    Poor Celia...the Hogwarts cenario was really hard on her. In both meanings...but really great piece of reading!!! I really like this story, then again, I always do, don't I.
    Well...I am waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
    Love
    Frini

    ps: What does this mean? "Editor's note: the line where Snape describes himself as a Lesbian in a former life is an exact quote from a former boyfriend"
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  • From ANON - Kim on February 12, 2003
    Glad to see your writing again. I am still looking to 3 rd part of your Snape and Helena Spy Games! This story is a bit different. Snape is alittle scary for me. Reminds me of Closet Land Alan Rickman film too mean. I'll keep reading as the sex is great and want to see where you go with this. I do hope he does come up with some redeeming qualities in future installment. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Carla on February 12, 2003
    He is the client from hell. Great character study. Poor Miss Graham. It's just like with Neville -- don't you just want to smack Snape and tell him to pick on someone his own size? I was getting more than a little creeped out with the lipstick all over the face -- make me think of a serial killer.
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  • From ANON - Frini on February 10, 2003
    Nasty isn't he? Oh well...that is why we like him!
    Very good chapter but I have to say I feel for Celia. Poor thing...he really is humiliating her.
    I really am anxious to waht is going to happen next, though. Hogwarts reunion...can't be good.
    I just smiled to myself as one thought crossed my mind: Snape is not only having sex with the same person but in the same bed as Percy Weasley was just a couple of hours ago. I wonder if that would upset him...hehehe.
    Love
    Frini
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  • From ANON - Heidi on February 09, 2003
    Another wonderful story has begun! As usually, very captivating, well-written and keeps our man Snape in nasty bat mode (my personal favourite).

    Keep on writing - I, for one, will keep on reading!!!

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  • From ANON - Amanda on February 09, 2003
    Excellent as usual. Creepy, nasty, snakey Snape RULES!!!!! Hopefully there will be more. I'm intrigued with Snape andschoschoolgirl" and just what he will choose to "do" with her. And will he allow her to "remember" about his tattoo? Keep it up, and I will check back frequently. And Lucius is worse, which makes it all the more fun. I wonder if she will end up comparing Snape with Lucius in the end. There are worse things than being physically used and abused.
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  • From ANON - cassie on February 03, 2003
    I must say I love your writing style. Ever since reading your Helena/Severus stories, I've been checking back constantly to see if you've posted anything more. Please keep the chapters coming... :)
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