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Reviews for The Dark Room

By : shellylynnc
  • From ANON - June on July 03, 2004
    It is now official: you killkilling me.

    Chapter 9 - CLIFFHANGER!!! Red stain AND black stain!?!?! She's having twins?? I still say SNAPE is the best bet. Malfoy can come see the baby on supervised visits on a tight leash (may he choke on it!). Ewww....the red stain doesn't mean it could be DRACO's kid, does it? A fate worse than death! Besides, it sounds like there are a bunch of pregnant witches that Lucius could/should marry ... knows his way around the obstetrics floor, eh ... And don't forget Voldemort -- Lucius is still on the dark side, opposite of Mari's work.

    Don't be a dunderhead author -- SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE! Or else Snape will take away house points and assign you detention with Malfoy! Talking about dunderheads -- Malfoy needed to be TOLD that he's being too rough, stringing her up for a whole week and having Draco rape her? The combined Malfoy IQ points can be counted on one hand! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE NOW!

    [Please ... reviewer on hands and knees ...]
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  • From ANON - star on July 03, 2004
    omg how can that be? update!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2004
    update update please write more about lucius mmmmm lucius
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  • From ANON - Lauralee on June 27, 2004
    You're fanfic is AWESOME! I must admit that you're extremely good at reaching practically everyone's desires and fantasies! I know I'm late in discovering your works of art, but these are the best, damn stories I've read on this site so far. Not many grammar mistakes at all, variety with scenarios (which is very impnt!)nt!), and great use of vocabulary. Please write more because I love Lucius' character and the way your portray him... Again, awesome!
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  • From ANON - shymmeri on June 27, 2004
    no, sorry, nobody likes poor, sexy Lucius. We're all too busy getting off on this story and rooting on Sexy Sevy to may much mind to the fair-haired man. OH, but the idea that he might like to be dominated uck uck Severus off is very interesting indeed... *maniacal laughter*
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  • From ANON - SnapeLady on June 26, 2004
    Absolutey priceless. I laughed sooo hard. 'Is it swine, swine? I'm snot snot' Hilarious. Snape pushing him over. Ye gods. Oh and the sex was great too. The heady experience of blood, pain and passion..ohhhh. Glorious.
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  • From on June 26, 2004
    Every chapter title has 'sex' in it. I wonder why. I love the drunk talk. It seems like Lucius is softening up a bit hmmm? Holding her hand and now staying the night. Running his hand through Snape's blood, oooh that sent shivers down my spine. For once Mari is causing the pain...*groans*fans* Very hot...
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  • From ANON - kyttilinn on June 26, 2004
    animal sex.. muaha priceless. fuck. you really need to update again. no kidding. ^.^ now... what does that face look like its doing? hehehe ahm off topic! muahaha FUCKING UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - star on June 26, 2004
    update this story!!!
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  • From ANON - June on June 26, 2004
    Grrrr . . . must I repeat myself? SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE NOW! As for the end of Chapter 8, I don't think your Lucius is interested in love (judging from your previous chapters). Since Mari is an intelligent potions researcher, she should be smart enough to choose Snape. Right? Right? WRITE!!!
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  • From ANON - SL on June 26, 2004
    Incredible...must take cold shower...Lol...I hope this story goes on for a long time...
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  • From ANON - Sarah Potter on June 16, 2004
    interesting...i wonder who she will choose...keep writing!
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  • From ANON - MMR on June 16, 2004
    *Wow*This is one piece of great smut. I'm loving it so please update. Oh and it's got to be Snape. Given the choice who'd want to live with a jerk live Malfoy for the rest of her life? Snape all the way.
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  • From ANON - SnapeLover on June 15, 2004
    This is my all tiavoravorite. Hot! You do the sex scenes sooo well and the men...perfect. Gotta say I hope she picks Snape though. Lol. Missy
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  • From ANON - Me on June 14, 2004
    I enjoyed it very much. Keep writing. (Oh...and I'd really like her to choose Snape. But obviously it's your story and whoever she chooses will work out. But yeah...I
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