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Reviews for Harry Potter and his crush at hogwarts

By : hermione6
  • From bill560682 on March 23, 2009
    finally someone who mention protection or in this case the lack of said protection.
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  • From ANON - Skye and Julez on October 14, 2005
    We're sorry, but we really did lose interest whilst reading your fanfic from the first to the second chapter.
    We don't exactly appreciate chatspeak, [eg. 'how r u?' short terms for easy words. u - you.] so it was rather hard to read.
    Sorry, but this was just our opinion.
    And we don't exactly think Aunt Petunia would really act like very kind etc, I know it's FANfiction, but that's kinda overboard.
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  • From ANON - i-wanna-bone-hermione on August 20, 2004
    you have terrible writting style, take everything a bit slowing and give a bit more discription and stuff
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  • From ANON - AristaStarfyr on July 23, 2004
    Fluff is fine. Fluff with characters GROSSLY out of character is not.

    Even if one did not have the chance to read the books, the movies are a BIG CLUE
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  • From ANON - Drey on July 10, 2004
    Your story has a nice start, but, you do need to work on yourllinlling and grammer to make it even better.
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  • From SilverFireFox on June 17, 2004
    Srry but that is just way to out of character for his aunt petunia.......

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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 23, 2004
    Take this how you will - I am older and do not appreciate "net"speak. Consider cleaning up your grammar and maybe you'll get a better response. Good luck.
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