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Reviews for The Slave

By : InkaLakhala
  • From ANON - Lils on January 04, 2007
    you ever gonna update that story?

    :)
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  • From ANON - SnarkySnake on February 16, 2005
    Ah.. very nice.. I especially liked the last chapter. Would you mind to inform me when (if?) you update? :-)
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  • From ANON - BookOfNicodemus on July 04, 2004
    It's been a while since I've read some genuine, heart-felt, honest BDSM. I have missed it. You did excellently, superb really. The last chapter was my personal favorite - it showed a whole different side to their relationship. Loved it. Looking forward to more. There is more, right....?
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  • From ANON - Orphelia Malfoy on May 30, 2004
    Wow, loved the chapter, as always...but for the first time I am very sorry for Severus! I hope you manage to update soon, but don't worry if you don't.
    Oh and thanks for the review ob ffn, glad you liked it!
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  • From ANON - DragonG on May 10, 2004
    Very good so far! And sensual... :)
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  • From ANON - Rahela on May 05, 2004
    Please keep this fic going! It's excellent, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - girly on May 01, 2004
    Hello sweet, this is very good. I have to say you are a little scary though!

    As for Malfoy names I always thought they were meant to have dark associations...

    Malfoy - bad deed (bad pun)
    Draco - dragon
    Luscius - Lucifer, the devil
    Narcissus - this one is obvious, but vanity.

    They are childrens books,the nice characters have nice hoest sounding names. Traditional English ones that everyone recognises. Like in the Disney Sleeping beuty, where the princess is called Araura (sunrise I think) and the bad witch is Maleficent. Can't really get more blatent!

    But I have to agree the similarity to luscious is rather fun.

    I had a dictioary moment... [Middle English lucius, alteration of licious, perhaps short for delicious, delicious. See delicious.] and [Gratifying a depraved sense; obscene.] Interesting...
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  • From ANON - Rahela on April 29, 2004
    Please write ch. 3! I'm constantly late to class because I HAVE to keep checking for it. I have to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - DragonG on April 26, 2004
    lol! I like it! (Well, I like Snape, Lucius and bondage, so, no wonder!) Actually I think it is very good and don't worry about the title, it's short but makes a point! :)
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  • From ANON - Orphelia Malfoy on April 25, 2004
    Good to see this here...especially because your second chapter on ffn was great...want more! And now that you can go up to NC17, oh the possibilties, I can't wait! Update soon, please!?
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  • From ANON - JO_T on April 24, 2004
    The End? It can't be! There has to be more to this. I want more, I wanna see what Lucy does!
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  • From ANON - Ellen on April 23, 2004
    A very good beginning! You have a lovely flowing style--I look forward to the next chapter.
    :)
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