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By : scarletmesokiba
  • From scarletmesokiba on April 30, 2004
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  • From ANON - Laney on April 29, 2004
    It seems like it has some potential. however, you need to figure out how to make it so it's not all one big paragraph...not only does it make it easier to read, but i also...makes it easier to read. quotes should be used better, as well as comma's, periods, etc.
    it it is easier to read longer chapters. they don't have to be horribly long (trust me, mine aren't that long), but so we have something to quench our thirst and keep up interested. and yeah, i agree with blubb-blubb, you maybe wanna go into deeper detail and slower...but maybe that's what you want; to get this part over with and get to the main part, i'm not sure.
    if you want a beta (not that you necessarily need it, but sometimes they're helpful) just e-mail me (thoi'mi'm not the best beta, i'll admit...i've only done it once or twice before, but i'll try to help ya) at LittleBandieGirl@yahoo.com

    peace, and good luck
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  • From scarletmesokiba on April 29, 2004
    am i good
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  • From ANON - blubb-blubb on April 27, 2004
    The chapters are a little bit short and so I cannot really say something about the content. You might go a little bit slower and explain the situation a little bit more, because it seems that you jump between moments. Also you should look after your spelling and grammar - it's horrible (and if I mention that it says something, because my native language is not english.
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