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By : scarletmesokiba
  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2004
    for fuck's sake!!!!!!!!!!!
    1. Get it proofread.
    2. Lose the




    gaps! makes it totally unreadable, and i don't care how small it looks without them.
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  • From ANON - JO on June 05, 2004
    NEEDS MORE DETALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I GOT LOST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! grrrrrrr
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  • From StarwolfRealms on May 10, 2004
    Scarlet/Jamie
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  • From ANON - StarwolfRealms on May 10, 2004
    Okay, so I did mispell your name. Jamie, sorry. But my offer stands. I'll beta for you if you want me to help you improve.
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  • From ANON - StarwolfRealms on May 10, 2004
    So a beta is someone who edits and helps an author out? Is it? Hmm, I had been wondering what the hell a beta was.
    Now that I know the definition, if Jaimie_the_dragon wants me to, I'll beta for her (you are a girl, right?)
    I like where this story is going but you lack detail, need serious editing, spell checking and grammar checking. Email if interested Jaimie. (I hope I spelled your name/tag right.)
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  • From ANON - Mattress Monkey on May 08, 2004
    Grammar and spelling are your friend. Please, do us and yourself a favor, and use them. If you type in Microsoft Word, hit F7 once in a while, okay? And if you type in something else, just use a dictionary. The spelling mistakes hurt my eyes.

    And what's the deal with this "killing Hermione" business?!
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  • From scarletmesokiba on May 04, 2004
    1
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  • From scarletmesokiba on May 04, 2004
    !
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  • From ANON - Katie on May 03, 2004
    I'M SORRY!!!!!! I was in a bad mood..... forgive me! I suggest you look around for a beta though, someone who can help you pace the story out a bit more, and spell and use grammar correctly... just ask around and you should find someone who's willing. Again, sorry for my mean comments...
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  • From ANON - Katie on May 03, 2004
    ok, I'm sorry, I normally try to be really positive in reviews, but this story sucks. When you learn how to write, spell correctly and use correct grammar, try posting again, all right?
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  • From scarletmesokiba on May 03, 2004
    THIS IS THE ONLY WAY I KNOW TO CHECK REVIEWS... I WANT TO BE BETTER...
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  • From ANON - SilentBystander on May 01, 2004
    I agree with the others who have told you to work on spelling and grammar. Even if English is not your native language - which is no excuse to write so poorly - you need to put more time and effort into writing itself as well as into checking. I cannot honestly say that I like the story, because it's too rushed. You give virtually no explanation and the errors are bad enough to distract me completely. However, if you're willing to accept the mass opinion that you need to work, and you're willing to do so, you can certainly improve vastly. The story will benefit from it.
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  • From ANON - Lulu on April 30, 2004
    Try to put spaces between sentences. Spelling characters name the right way and just spelling correctly would help a lot.
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  • From ANON - BCM on April 30, 2004
    Like the plot, keep at it, couple of suggestions though. 1) Use spaces after you end a sentence, I have vision problems and it's hard to read when I don't know where sentences start. 2) Please capitilize names. 3) Spell check, words like try do not turn into trieing, as drive does not turn into driveing.
    BCM, Peace & Love!
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  • From ANON - Grammar Police #42 on April 30, 2004
    Your first two chapters are being detracted from because of the incorrect grammar. Punctuation, spellings... It is all pulling people away from enjoying your story. If you are going to continue please either proof-read or get a beta- most of us hate to see a good story get lost under all the aggravating junk that can go wrong with a story.
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