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Reviews for Arithmancy for Muggles

By : Flyingegg
  • From ANON - devsgma on May 05, 2004
    He left his shoes - I'm so glad.
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  • From ANON - Eva on May 05, 2004
    "Hermione turned her head to see that his shoes were still on the floor by her bed. When she turned back, Snape was gone."

    That is so sweet -- obviously he's reminding her of what she said, and he doesn't want to leave.

    Absolutely wonderful chapter and an equally wonderful story. I look forward to your next udpate. :-)

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on May 05, 2004
    That was very sweet...he left his shoes...hehehe. I got this wonderful image of Snape wandering through Hogwart's corridors in his socks...
    So, when will we learn what Hermione saw at that final battle, hmmm? Looking forward to more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on May 05, 2004
    Usually when I read a story, I appreciate a particular character, plot twist, line, or something similar. It's rare that I find an entire chapter that stands out in quality. For me, your chapter 4 was that kind of chapter - sexy, fluffy & angsty all at the same time. It was terrific. I look forward to more such chapters.
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  • From ANON - Lucie on May 05, 2004
    Wow!
    A wonderful new chapter. You have captured their mood beautifully. And he has left his shoes behind, so there's hope he will return. And Albus is one evil git! Or isn't he?


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  • From ANON - AJS on May 05, 2004
    The shoes. Oh the shoes. Sigh.
    I'm enjoying this enormously; you've intrigued me. I love not knowing where you're going next.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on May 05, 2004
    Leaving the shoes is brilliant... just brilliant.
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  • From kohaku on May 05, 2004
    This story really surprised me! It's such an odd combination of muggle and magical, ordinary and romantic. I really like it. It seems so realistic and slightly grim, but then surprises you with magic or romance. And your writing style and character interactions are very smooth. Not to mention that the storyline is fascinating. I'm interested in indiginous rights and cultures, so the comparisons and comments applied to the HP world were great to read, such a unique angle. I can't wait to read more, thank you for writing such quality fanfiction!
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  • From ANON - pyewacket on May 04, 2004
    What a great story but it is so sad! Our favorite couple is so melancholy and the situation seems so desperate. I do hope you will work things out for them in the long run. By the way--absolutely smashing line about having eaten the food of the faerie. Actually that whole scene was great but I loved that line.
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  • From ANON - Lucie on May 04, 2004
    That was most ... satisfying. Shall I put on that "Time to say goodbye" record now in preparation for the next chapter? Looking forward to reading much more of this!

    lucie_p
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on May 04, 2004
    And there is more than just comedy with you. Wow, what a great chapter. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Pearle on May 03, 2004
    Very nice. Quiet emotions, undatedated but very powerful. Snape could cross back and forth between worlds but to have Hermione forever banned would eventually cause resentment and other problems. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on May 03, 2004
    Bittersweet is right. Beautiful, though. I loved Snape's plaintively hopeful (and oh-so-literary) remark that
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  • From ANON - Deeble on May 03, 2004
    Bittersweet is right. Beautiful, though. I loved Snape's plaintively hopeful (and oh-so-literary) remark that
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  • From ANON - hephastus on May 03, 2004
    This has got to be one of the most poignant and bittersweet romances I've read in a long time. When Severus asks Hermione if he can leave his heart in her flat as he has no use for it in the day to day....what writing. Thank you so much.
    Helen
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