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Reviews for Photos of the Past

By : sailorpipn
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 07, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 06, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 01, 2005
    Cool story - update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lana Manckir on July 16, 2004
    OH please oh please update now LOL! I think it's perfect and I can't wait to see what went wrong and how he's gonna fix it.
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  • From ANON - JasperPress77 on May 01, 2004
    I hope there will be more photos involved as the story progresses. I like wizarding photos and seeing what people do at the time. It's amazing what a magical camera can pick up. Nice fic, please continue :-)
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 29, 2004
    Thanks for the longer chapter. I'm getting a better feel for your story and I can tell its going to be quite angsty, but as long as there is a happy ending I can stick with it.
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  • From ANON - Nic on April 29, 2004
    I really like it - it was soon clear who was who and there are not enough erroro to get really ditracted. So don't worry write on! But a Beta is always a great thing not only to catch things you have missed also to help you getting over the plot - she / he can tell you how it looks from the readers point of view without having the whole story in theri heads ;-)
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  • From ANON - TheGreyLady... who is too lazy to sign in on April 29, 2004
    It looks like a really interesting premise. A few notes, though. It would benefit you if you could make the chapters a little longer (or update, like, every friggin hour.) You could also do to have a beta-reader... sometimes, they catch vagueness as well as spelling/grammar errors. If you need one, I'd be happy to offer. I look forward to seeing where this goes!

    Still Ill,
    TheGreyLady
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  • From ANON - Heksje on April 29, 2004
    I like the story, but I think you might want to consider a beta-reader, since there are quite a few grammatical errors. Don't let something small like that interrupt the flow of your story. :c)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2004
    this is really good, cant wait for more, a little hard to understand but still interesting!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2004
    this is really good, cant wait for more, a little hard to understand but still interesting!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 28, 2004
    Your idea is a good one, but there is too little to get much out of it. Please write more, perhaps you can give us something with more details and more of a story.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 28, 2004
    Too short and too confusing. Sorry. Good luck with your writing.
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  • From ANON - viz on April 28, 2004
    Stupid Snape. Great story, stupid Snape. ^_^
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on April 28, 2004
    Oh I like the start of this . More soon please.
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