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Reviews for Shattered Glass

By : Eadon
  • From ANON - Alysha on May 06, 2004
    hey

    i can't wait for more!!!!

    Alysha
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  • From ANON - RoseEva on May 06, 2004
    I saw your responses before AFF fucked things up and I don't think I write smut well. I think you do a great job! Hmm...I like the idea you are going at, I just need more action *licks lips* and calm down Snape a little - lol.
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  • From Padfoot on May 05, 2004
    "Were your majorly disappointed with my attempt at the sex scenes?"

    Are you joking? HELLO! *bangs on Eadon's head* They're incredibly sexy, inventive and spell-binding yet not over the top in a way that it seems forced. You have to stop being so selfcritical! Your story is absolutely mesmerising and the way you are going about it is perfect. Don't fuss and get on with the next chapter! I have spoken!
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  • From ANON - theoddguy on May 04, 2004
    Great story.I personaly liked the sex scene.I thought it was nice for their first time.The kisses where hot.;) I cant wait to find out who or what sent that dream to Harry.And what the true meaning of tatoo is for?


    Great story so far,and I cant wait for new chapters.:)
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  • From ANON - alysha on May 04, 2004
    hey!

    yay more!!! lol

    Alysha
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  • From ANON - Relena on May 04, 2004
    Your writting is amazing, i can acctually SEE in my mind Harry and Draco as your words are processed. In msot storys its two faceless guys, i just can't keep then harry and draco, yours is good!

    Keep it up pleasE?
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  • From redrose on May 04, 2004
    Snape is such a hornball. I like how Draco just started groping Harry in the middle of class. Real good, as is your attempt at a sex scene. Better than mine. My best is "Pink satin" and I don't know.... The offer to beta is real, just sendme an e-mail if you want me to beta your fic. Keep writing, I enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - shelleykids on May 04, 2004
    I love the sex dream and do hope you will have more soon lol not just the sex though lol
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  • From ANON - Ginny on May 04, 2004
    You're SO good at writing sex scenes! Don't worry about that.. I like the way you describe it without getting all sappy. And I like the whole idea of the plot, Harry becoming evil and abandoning his friends and stuff. Can't wait 'till next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Caffine High on May 03, 2004
    This is quite interesting and well written please continue very soon.
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  • From redrose on May 03, 2004
    Oh, hun, here's a tissue *hangs her a pair of Draco's black silk boxers* now just feel happy and update soon. If you need help or ideas always feel free to e-mail me. If you need a beta, the same applies. I love this fic but I see one tiny, itty, bitty thing: Snape is supposed to be a spy so why would Harry tell him about wanting to be a Dark Wizard. Unless it's a cover. I liked the bit about where Harry bled 'cause Draco bit him hard. I usually don't go for those things *looks at fic Dark bonds* nope - lol. Keep it up!

    Much love with a big shaggin, boy lovin', smut writing, hug!

    Rose Eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2004
    I love it. The whole evil Harry thing. But can there please please be a happy ending? Even if it's an evil ending, make it happy? Save my sanity lol. And yeah, a li bit bit of roughness in the sex can be so hot ^_^
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  • From redrose on May 03, 2004
    Harry's the half-blood. Hermione's the disgusting mudblood. I liked this fic because I adore Dark!Harry *licks lips* have fun with it and I must continue reading!
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  • From ANON - shelleykids on May 03, 2004
    Please have more soon I would like to see more of this bad Harry lol
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  • From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on May 03, 2004
    WHOA! My eyes just bugged out of my skull with that kiss! Whiew! *Pant! Pant!*

    Can't wait to see where this is going.
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