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Reviews for Kiss It Better

By : GertrudeFlint
  • From JaceDamian23 on September 25, 2007
    "Ah. Did they? Hmm. Well, next time you tell them to worry about their own, not yours." Percy moves his hand slightly upward, to give the cock in question a reassuring pat. "It'll grow when it's ready, you know. End up bigger than both of theirs put together, I shouldn't wonder."

    Ron snickers, no longer looking like he's about to cry again. And his cock quivers beneath Percy's touch. Like his own did, when Oliver...


    hmmm good part





    "I'm fine," he pants, utterly surprised to find that his hand is still where it was -- and his thumb is actually rubbing Ron's cock, which isn't as soft as it was a moment ago.

    ha he has no idea he's doing that lmfao


    "Sore. Heard you." The words are slow, heavy in the heat, dragged up from somewhere very deep within him as he looks at his brother. "Shall I... kiss it better for you, then?"

    And Ron shifts his hips, opening his legs a bit wider. "If you want," he whispers -- and after that there's only one small sound, one hitch of breath, as Percy touches his lips to the place his fingers have caressed.

    thats hot how percy said that



    i liked that percy explained to ron...


    All at once he's glad that the first cock in his mouth is Ron's, not Oliver's. With a stranger or even a friend he'd probably be nervous now, embarrassed by the intimacy of the act; but this is only Ron, quite familiar and safe... and entirely new, astonishingly arousing.

    I guess he's right



    "This is called fellatio," he informs Ron, his voice unaccountably husky. "So -- do you like it? Can I do it some more?

    hmm i didn't know...is that italian? haha of course rons not going to say no



    "Percy!" Ron pleads. "It's brilliant -- I like it -- but you keep stopping..." He falls back onto the grass; his hands move to grasp at Percy's hair, nudging him down again. "Please, don't stop, don't stop

    ha now you know your good haha


    This time Ron doesn't wait to be taken in, but pushes forward impatiently as soon as Percy opens his lips.
    lol






    'Course I am," says Ron, with a grin. "That was cool. You looked ever so funny -- but now I know what it tastes like!"

    "What?"

    "Spunk," Ron answers smugly.

    Percy fumbles around for the handkerchief, finally finding it on the ground beneath his trousers. "It's called semen, actually --"

    "I know that! Charlie told me -- and he showed me some, when I asked. But he wouldn't let me taste it, or watch him make it." Ron holds still and lets Percy wipe his face, then stretches out on his back again, yawning. "So, did you like it too?"

    And Percy feels a huge, unstoppable smile spreading across his face. "It was great," he says. "Really great."


    lmfao funny




    wow great story
    best percy ron story
    so freaking hotttt
    loved it

    i wish you'd post it on fanfiction.net so i can favorite it
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  • From Viktoria on July 15, 2007
    I absolutely loved how Percy's thoughts started to flip from Oliver to Ron. Absolutely lovely!
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  • From ANON - treefrog on May 16, 2007
    Very sweet, Ill have to check out your other stories now, you're a good writer :)
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  • From ANON - brian on July 01, 2006
    My Fav storey ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I love it!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ainsley on November 04, 2005
    ...Wow....See, I have this DEEEP seething hate for percy, I don't like him..he just bugs me.. XD >_> Only read it 'cos I saw rons name. (I read anything with ron in it that has to do with ron and a guy xD) BUT I have to say, this was a good fic, and I hate percy a little less then I did before, I think this was very well written. Nice job. :D
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  • From ANON - raver on March 29, 2005
    ...After reading all of that...I am sorely dissapointed. Dissapointed that you have just so suddenly...stopped writing anymore. One with your talent shouldn't write and stop...otherwise, it goes to waste. talent should never be wasted, no matter what...please. another chapter. Ron anyone....but to leave us hanging like this? distasteful. don't be like Darius DeValle and take a month to finish...or even start....one chapter...
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  • From GertrudeFlint on December 08, 2004
    Reply to Darius: No, it's not supposed to end there. All the recent problems on this site have screwed up the text of some stories. Please try this fic again, I've just edited the file and it's all fixed now. Thanks for letting me know.
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  • From ANON - Lydia on November 28, 2004
    Umm... i get the whole oliver part but the ron part i'm a little confused on. anyone mind explaining?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2004
    I like this story. I've recently gotten into weasleycest. Hopefully you'll write another story soon. I like Percy and Ron coupling.
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  • From on May 08, 2004
    Wow.
    This is good.
    Really really good.
    What got me gasping was that Ron was still an innocent nine-year-old.
    Two thumbs up.
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  • From ANON - Hikari on May 04, 2004
    Very nice. The whole thing had a feel of being sweet, which you don't find o. No. No distracting grammatical mistakes either.
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