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Reviews for Belle of the Ball

By : alicat999
  • From ANON - Alicia on July 09, 2004
    NO!Don;t Stop writing ok?I hope Viktor will kiss hermione,to make the plot more twisted!
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  • From ANON - Alpha on June 19, 2004
    Good story, keep writing. Use your spell checker before posting -- there are a few typos here and there, not obtrusive but just concrit as you asked. Story works well, love the rare orchids. Adding Krum is great! I can't wait to see how Severus reacts!
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  • From ANON - Jamie on June 19, 2004
    I really like your story so far. Keep up the great writing and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Min on June 19, 2004
    Ohh...an update. Yay =)
    I liked this chapter because of the length and the quality.
    You're doing a great job!

    //Min...
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  • From ANON - selened on June 19, 2004
    Interesting plotline so far. I'll be very interestedsee see what Snape makes of Crum. I wonder if Draco has it in him to really fall for Hermione. Thanks for posting.
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  • From ANON - Rachel on June 19, 2004
    This looks promising! I like how playful your writing style is. However, I am often a bit distracted by the occasional spelling and grammar errors. Other than that, I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 25, 2004
    Chapters 1-5... I just finished reading what you have so far & will be looking forward to your next update & Hermione's date with Draco!!! I am quite curious to see just how much Albus knows of her true past as well as seeing how her training with Severus goes!!! The tension between Severus & Hermione is so thick, am wondering if he will have a change of attitude toward her now that the Malfoy's are entering the mix?!?

    The only thing that I could say in cc is that you do have some spelling errors, but I do very much like your story!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on May 24, 2004
    Hey Alicat,

    I like the premise of your fic. It has the potential of being a really good fic.
    Just one thing though... you need a beta. A beta would polish your story and check your grammar. It would make it a much smoother story to read.
    Consider it.

    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - Lynsey on May 21, 2004
    Of course you know I love the story and want to read more!!
    I like how you keep the characters especially Snape how JK would want them.

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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on May 13, 2004
    That word up there is supposed to be 'closing', not 'clong, lol. Sorry, I just looked at it. :D
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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on May 13, 2004
    Hello again!! I'm glad to see that Albus thought it was a good idea to explain things to Hermione. If she gets too confused this early, she tends to be a bit annoying in fics. And the other review where I said 'And the clong line' I was just making a funny because everyone always puts something to the effect of 'I can't wait for the next update'. Sorry for confusing you. :)
    ArienAstera
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  • From ANON - Min on May 13, 2004
    This was a nice chapter, though a bit eventless.
    I liked your description of Mages and I'm looking forward to see what happened with Hermione and Severus.
    I'm sorry for the shor review, but I've got classes now.
    //Min...
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  • From ANON - Paige on May 12, 2004
    I love it, and can't wait to find out how Hermione and Snape evade the Malfoys! Keep that fire going!!
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  • From ANON - Esario on May 12, 2004
    Hey, this is really good, I cant wto sto see anew chapter. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on May 12, 2004
    It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy (sounds like a personal problem, lol) when people acknowledge me in their stories. I love knowing that people care. :)

    Alright, mushy stuff said, I still like it (yay!) and I wonder what Albus's theory is (but not so much to kill my self, good job!!). Are they soulmates or something? Heehee, is Snape the heir of Gryffindor? Or Hufflepuff? LOL That would be great...

    And I can just imagine your Lucius sitting behind his desk, fingers steepled, saying "Excellent". I love it.

    And the closing line...

    "I can't wait for the next update!!"

    ArienAstera
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