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Reviews for Belle of the Ball

By : alicat999
  • From ANON - Tang on May 12, 2004
    Hey Alicat
    Nice start to the fic, the three Slytherin boys are very OCC. It always cracks me up (in a good way) when Hermione turns out to be not only a pureblood but also of esteemed parentage, its very common in SSHG fics, which kind of runs against the grain of what she stands for.
    Im looking forward to finding out what Hermione and Flitwicks project is about, not to mention Dracos "seduction techniques"
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  • From ANON - Sharon on May 12, 2004
    I intrigued as to where you are taking the power connection angle of your story. So far, you have begun to setup several good story threads and some tension between SS and HG. My only suggestion is that a little more information in some sections might help build the pace of the story. In some places the plot is just a little too thin and a little more description might flesh out the piece. For example, what did Severus do to her work in the lab that has her so upset? You never reallyl usl us enough to make her extreme anger understandable --- just her rants as she blasts everything in her path. She is the voice of reason and the champion of the house elf, so random acts of destruction don't seem to be in her nature without EXTREME motivation. My point is your story is pretty good but would benefit from some defining elements and more details. Hope this was helpful. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Evo on May 12, 2004
    I like your story so far. Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Min on May 12, 2004
    Hey...

    This fics seems very interesting, you've really captured my interest.
    I didn't see any errors, you've got the text divided instead of in a clump.
    Though I wouldn't mind longer chapters.

    Please update soon. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
    //Min...
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  • From ANON - Mayken on May 12, 2004
    Ahh was waiting to see what happened before i reviewed, and now that chapter three has been read, I'm begining to see this will turn out to be quiet a good little story.

    I like how Hermione went a little rampant , it seemes quiet believeable, Snape would turn a person to either Drink or distruction.

    Keep up the writing cant wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on May 12, 2004
    Well, if you hate it so much when people don't review I guess i will. :)

    This is interestingly good, or goodly interesting... Anyway, it makes me want to know what happens next without making me want to kill my self from the anticipation (some authors have trouble with that). I just hope you are the type that updates sooner rather than later. (:

    Good job, ArienAstera
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 11, 2004
    Interesting start. Looking forward to see what happens next. More soon please.
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