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Reviews for Belle of the Ball

By : alicat999
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 07, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 21, 2005
    Hope ya update this, i am enjoying it so far.
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  • From ANON - Cristie on April 12, 2005
    Wow! I just love this story. Love triangle and unknown power, a great combination. Hmmmn maybe some one else might get involved as well.....all I can say is GO SEVERUS!!
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  • From ANON - Vickie on April 12, 2005
    Very intriguing story! I like the idea of Severus having to watch more than one other man vie for Hermione's affections (even if Draco has ulterior motives). It will be interesting to see how he manages to win her from the others. I really liked finding out what Hermione's project was. I hope Severus doesn't get away with some barely hinted-at apology. He ought to have to grovel at least a little bit.

    Here's a hint (helpful, I hope) about the problem with spelling. I can tell you do use a spell checker, because I didn't notice any actual misspelled words. The problem is using the wrong word. E.g., bare/bear, here/hear, quiet/quite, aloud/allowed, to/too/two, there/their/they're, your/you're. The spell checker will accept the word as correctly spelled, but can't tell you if you're using the wrong word. Hope this helps clear up the confusion. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story.
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  • From ANON - BRanwen on April 11, 2005
    Intresting ....very intresting...I wonder what LUcius is oing to do next. Anyways I think this is a really good story and i can't wait to see what this ios going
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  • From ANON - j on January 09, 2005
    very good!
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  • From ANON - mele on January 06, 2005
    very good story! i especially like the way you don't state the obvious. waiting patiently for the next chapter. well, not to patiently. aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - Jax on January 06, 2005
    WhooooHooooo! You did it, finally! Thank You! Thank You! ThankYOU!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on January 06, 2005
    Great story so far. I am really intrigued with Hermione and her new found powers. good job!!
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  • From ANON - Talene on July 20, 2004
    I like this story but I feel as if in some areas you are skipping over or glossing over some things Just my opinion but it just doesn't.....read right? You have a WONDERFUL story here! It sounds as though you have things well planned and thought out and that is possibly what is causing the feeling of rushing. I have a tendancy to do that sometimes in my writing and I have to write out the story so that it is done with no danger of forgetting or alteration from plot bunnies and such. (Insideous things thoses plot bunnies are! h I f I find then that if I go back and flesh the story out that it reads better and fleshes it out more. Perhaps I am wording this wrong. There is every likelihood that you want your story to be just this way. Who am I to say you're wrong? Your style is yours and I admire your fertile mind and active imagination! Keep writing and take no offence at what I hsaidsaid. Ok?
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  • From ANON - Min on July 09, 2004
    Thank you for the update, I liked this chapter just like the previous chapters.
    Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing,
    though If I may say so, they're just some short words of praise and nothing else. =)

    //Min..
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  • From ANON - exotic-rock-princess on July 09, 2004
    Love the story. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what's going to happen between Snape and Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Alicia on July 09, 2004
    Don't stop writing!Keep going!Your doing great!Go you!
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  • From ANON - dopamine on July 09, 2004
    did u try putting this on www.fanfiction.net
    i think u'd get much more reviews (and reading) there
    great stuff,anyway
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  • From ANON - t. on July 09, 2004
    this is really great!
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