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Reviews for Twin Link

By : BreeMcGregor
  • From ANON - shaz on May 28, 2004
    it's great, its so nice to read a story that doesnt go along the same lines as every other one, its different and well written and yes there are typos but who cares, its good, no its really good, please continue with this, thanx for the diversity
    shaz
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  • From ANON - Joanna Scarlett on May 28, 2004
    Bree, I'm really enjoying the story so far, it's funny and original however, the spelling and gramatical errors are distracting and detracting from an otherwise really good, entertaining story. I read all of the reviews left thus far and none of them have been nitpickee nor have they been flames, they have all been honest, well intentioned constructcritcriticisms. The very meaning of being a writer is that you take ideas and convert them into a coherent, smoothly flowing story with words and those words need to be spelleght,ght, punctuated correctly and used correctly. No one is tryng to diss you, we are trying to help you be a better writer, that is what most writers want and ask for.

    I hope you continue with the story and I also hope that you take some of the very good advice that has been given to you.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on May 28, 2004
    I have been reading and enjoying your story - I also read the reviews after reading your A/N at the end of chapter 5. Yes, spelling and other mistakes do spoil an otherwise good plot base and some rather good dialogue. Don't give in - your beta may be a good friend, but a beta is to help you correct the errors in your story. Keep your friend, but if you have spell check on your computer, also try the dictionary part. That may help you a great deal. This is not a flame - only an example - "Snape
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on May 28, 2004
    I really am enjoying your story as it seems to be an original plot with good dialogue and interaction between the characters. Very sorry that you are getting flames because of misspelled words and other "technical" issues. You say you have a good beta, but a good beta is SUPPOSED to fix the misspelled words and other technical issues to make your writing better. Your story is great, but it would be even better fixed. You are doing a great job, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

    If you would like someone else to beta for you, I don't mind helping you out. Just drop me an email. :)
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 28, 2004
    hey, this is a GREAT fic. When I read what you said about some people not liking this I HAD to review and let you know that I think you are doing great. It is funny and sexy at the same time. So keep up the good work and please don't get discouraged!
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  • From ANON - me on May 27, 2004
    UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - revel_in_me on May 26, 2004
    Wow, another chapter would be really good right about now. This is great.

    -Cheers :)
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  • From ANON - Louise on May 25, 2004
    I like the story a lot. Please remember to proof read your stuff as spell check does not get it all. You're is the contraction of you are not your. The Gull of the man???? He has a sea gull? Or does he have Gall???

    It may seem picky, but sometimes these errors are enough to put people off your story.
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  • From ANON - cortava on May 24, 2004
    Hey, I love your story so far, and I can't wait to see what happens during their talk. One nit-pik though, I think you want the word 'gall' not 'gull'.
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  • From ANON - Nazzy on May 24, 2004
    I've been reading this story since you first posted it and I love it. But, I feel like I keep reading the same thing over and over. Sachel is a player, he wants Hermione, she keeps slipping through his grasp and Severus is seems to be at the right place at the right time. The sbasibasic thing seems to happen in each paragraph so far, there doesn't seem to be any progression beyond that. I love the premise and I like how you have set everything up. I'm just hoping something different will happen.
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  • From ANON - RandomSnapeLover on May 24, 2004
    yay! another chapter. please keep them coming! this story is so original and i cant keep my eyes away from it! update soon!
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  • From ANON - RandomSnapeLover on May 21, 2004
    WOW! and i thought i got out of hand when people wrote fics about Snape! now he has a twin and its like two good parts of one great character! AH! you have to update!
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  • From ANON - lobowolf on May 21, 2004
    two for the price of one- how could it get better than having two snapes?
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  • From ANON - Wendy on May 21, 2004
    Kick ass loving this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!!!


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  • From ANON - nevillus on May 19, 2004
    Can I borrow them both for a few hours. Please!!!!!!! This fic is just what i needed after a hard days work. Keep the muses going i need more.
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