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By : OlympiaManet2003
  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 30, 2004
    This is one of the funniest stories I have ever read. This chapter is great. Now I have to wonder why Severus is supposed to talk to Hermione? And the "dark lord", I love him. Can't wait for more of this great fic.

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  • From ANON - Avery on May 30, 2004
    Absolutely brilliant! The dialogue is fantastic - I can actually hear it in my head. Funny as hell, too. More more more!
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  • From ANON - Deeble on May 30, 2004
    Very, very funny. Snape's attempt to be charming by only taking 20 points off Gryffindor is just one of the things that made me laugh out loud.
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  • From ANON - Kris Adrian on May 30, 2004
    This is a good story and was recommended to me by a friend, but you need to have it proof-read by someone who knows the rules about punctuation and capitalization after dialogue.

    For example:


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  • From ANON - gill on May 30, 2004
    Oh, that was so funny! It should come with a spew warning...

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  • From ANON - nimcra on May 30, 2004
    hilarious, absolutely hilarious. i'll be waiting to see where this fic goes. the death eaters as a political movement who'd have thunk it.
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  • From ANON - morgana on May 30, 2004
    quite good really. please keep it up. and did i mention how da** funny this is? well it is
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  • From ANON - telepsa on May 30, 2004
    a great fic! Hilarious, without trying toso, so, serious without trying to be so either, one of the most enjoyable stories I've read. I love the way you show the many hues of grey between black and white, without falling in the usual cliches. Definately gonna watch closely this one.
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  • From ANON - Kei on May 30, 2004
    Funny stuff!! I hopr to sn upn update from you soon. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - SolitaryAries on May 30, 2004
    HAHAHAHA!!! OMG I Love it! it's intelligent and a rather brilliant twist on an often over-darkened scenario. Never pictured the Dark Lord as being a cross between Martha Stewart and the Fab Five! I like how delicately out-of-character everyone is, while still maintaining their image. Fantastic, dearie :) keep going!
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  • From ANON - e on May 30, 2004
    i absolutely love this. your voldemort makes me giggle uncontrolably
    xoxo
    ,,,me...
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  • From ANON - karabdai on May 29, 2004
    I have no words for how funny this story is. I loved Voldie wandering the halls with a blue robe. He and Bella are so cute! Awesome work, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 29, 2004
    Remarkable! I haven't laughed so hard in a while! One of the best parody fics I've seen so far, poking fun at HP, fan fic and all the cliches as well. I esp. like the rendering of Voldemort. Hee! Please give more soon!
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  • From ANON - Gemma on May 25, 2004
    That was priceless! Positively priceless. I haven't laughed that hard since... um... wow, I really don't laugh much, do I? Snickering is more my forte. I hope you continue this--- pseudo-parody for the pseudo-intellectual sort. Are we sure this is actually a Harry Potter fan fiction? I think it's a bit of de Sade in disguise. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Adrienne on May 25, 2004
    Found my way over here from WIKTT, and let me just say that you, my dear, are a genius! This story is so completely tongue-in-cheek it blows my mind, and I love how you've taken every cliche and annoying stereotype about the Death Eaters and turned it inside out. I loved the Crucio bit at the end, and the jokes about drinking blood out of a skull. Bella, as well as Voldemort, is hilarious, and I think he's right: if my followers had left me for dead, and I was restricted to possessing imbeciles like Quirrel and random snakes, I'd be a little pissed off too. My only complaint is the formatting. It's extremely hard to read with those symbols replacing the first letter of every sentence, and your formatting of sentences is a little off too. A beta reader who's grounded in grammar should be able to help you out with that. Thanks ever so much for posting this story, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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