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Reviews for Invisible

By : SnapesDream
  • From Jocelyn25 on November 21, 2007
    *sighs*

    Lovely, they are just so perfect together *sighs*

    Wonderful written, though i could have done with some fluff afterwards ;)

    Jocy
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on November 06, 2007
    WOW! ::whining:: I WANT a Phantom Lover too!!!!!
    ;-D
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  • From slygriff21 on August 16, 2007
    Great story. I don't know how I missed this one. I loved it!

    Tiffany
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Isadorabelle on June 07, 2007
    Very nicely written cherrytree! Doesn't it make you want to become a frizzy haired bookworm?! lol write more!
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  • From ANON - ~*~Tasha~*~ on December 22, 2006
    Steamy ... awesome!
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  • From ANON - Mandy on June 23, 2006
    Very cute. But what exactly did he come there to do. I mean I can understand wanting to be invisible, traversing to her rooms and all, not wanting to be seen. But how did he get into her room, Hermione doesn't strike me as the type of witch to just leave her rooms unlocked and open for anyone, especially not while she's in bed masturbating. No matter, it was a cute little ficlett. I enjoyed it. I rather liked the dress myself, though I wish you had given a bit more of a description. It gets a little too lovey/mushy at the end. It was sex, they were frustrated, but I'm getting the impressiong that it was like "aww yay I found someone" kinda feeling from either party. That to me, in this sort of story, was built up too quickly. But again, good job on your cute little story.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on May 27, 2004
    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Texas Peach on May 25, 2004
    This was such a good story. I like that he came to her. They are my favorite Hogwarts couple anyway!

    Please keep writing

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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 25, 2004
    I don't know that this could have been any more DELICIOUS!!! This piece is FABULOUS!!! Deb >^..^<

    P.S., I do hope that you will be able to add more to Doubts and Desires & I'll Forget You soon, I LOVE both of those pieces!!!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 25, 2004
    Great story. Have you thought of maybe a short sequal?
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