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Reviews for Just Another Snape/Mary Sue Story

By : OktoberBlack
  • From ANON - tina on October 22, 2006
    Hello

    Um i enjoy your story very much and hope you would continue the story as i am dazzeld by the idea you plan for this story. If not i wish to have your permission to continue it if its not a problem with you? Im sure i can respect the rules and the futur of the storys as i put some of my own ideas in it. Of course if you had plan the story would end a certain way please tell me ill be glad to put it instead of mine. I would respect your wishes. I hope sincerly you leave me a chance and hold me up to my wishes.

    Thank you for your time.


    sincery: tina
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  • From ANON - vonHardenberg on January 24, 2006
    I must say that this is one of the most interesting takes that I have seen in the fanfic gallery. It would be nice if you could go further with it. I was intrigued with the Muggle World from the wizard's point of view. Hermione expressed the same point when she took Muggle Studies at Hogwarts. I would guess that JKR was leading us to a greater involvement of the magical world in the affairs of Muggles. The first chapter of HBP is very suggestive of that course. If I were the most powerful evil wizard would I be satisfied with wreaking havoc in the wizarding world alone? Not when I realize how much evil mischief I could cause in the Muggle World.
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  • From ANON - LadyShiva on May 28, 2005
    Aww, not going to finish? That is too bad, I was quite enjoying this. There's just about nothing I like more than a good "fish out of water" story, and they are rather hard to find(the good part at least). I really hope you get back into writing soon. Also, picking up some anti-love for Lucius? I can't blame ya, but he is dead sexy =o
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  • From ANON - Martha on February 11, 2005
    I read your story and enjoyed it... just thought i would review incase you ever felt like updating. x
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 05, 2005
    I love it...that was the first Snape fic that I found...erm...fully satisfying and living up to the Snape I picture.

    MORE ...PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Klink on December 16, 2004
    This story is just bloody brilliant so far! You have Snape's personallity in just the perfect way! Oh my gosh, and you capture all of the dead hard truethes that he would come up with! I have never, ever ever ever read a Snape fic that captures a foul side of him so well (I'm just on the first chapter still :P )
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  • From ANON - SL on June 26, 2004
    Nice.
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  • From ANON - Marti on June 25, 2004
    This is great. I can't believe I haven't seen this one before. Love it.
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  • From ANON - Musicdrink on June 25, 2004
    Hi! Interesting ideas. I would think the girls would be a little more curious about fact and fiction with Severus. I would be VERY curious as to what was true in his universe. You have him down pretty well, but he can come across a little whiney. I think a young Severus would be more like that. Also, give poor Amanda a little more private time with him. Also, what if they stop in a new age/head shop while they are out and about? His knowledge would be interesting, and not just "all this is ridculous!" I like your different food choices and as I am from a part of the country (usa) that does not have cheese curds, by the way I love them, yum!, it was funny to read about them. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From shellylynnc on June 24, 2004
    I'm reviewing after chap 9. (I don't have time to read both)
    Great chapter. Funny as hell.

    This story is so good the one
    suggestion I would make is that you change the summary
    to reflect more about the story. 'Two fan fiction writers make
    a wish to have Snape in their bed. What will they do with him
    when their wish comes true...or something of the sort. I think
    alot more people would read it.

    As for reviews, AFF readers just don't do that a whole lot. Most
    of them anyway.

    'Google search,' that was good.

    It wouldn't surprise Snape if Harry and Draco were gay...*laughs*

    'Stop being such a drama queen' loved it.

    Oh but the ending...Luscious Lucius...can't wait to get into the
    next chapter. Keep it up..I'm loving it..Lol
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  • From ANON - redsugg on June 24, 2004
    Great story i can't wait to read more i think it is absolutely great and an origial. I have a question for you will either of you get pregnant because no has mentioned any form of bith control so far. I hope you will update very very soon because i love your story. If you need a beta reader i would be more than happy to help.

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - Onyx on June 18, 2004
    Being a silly, Snape obsessed fan girl myself, I love the premise of this story, and can't wait to read more of it! Just thought I'd let you know. Great job, and so far, I've only made it thru chapter 1.
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  • From shellylynnc on June 02, 2004
    This was absolutely beautiful. Wonderful. It's got to be one of my all time favorites. Very funny. Snape riding shotgun. I laughed so hard when he won the prize at Fredrick's and now he's discovered porn. You do him so well too, perfect. I can't believe you only have two reviews. I love it. Great sex scenes too, you incorporated them into the plot very well. Everything flows well and the storyline is great. *applauds* Shelly
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  • From ANON - JSSumner on June 02, 2004
    This story is fantastic! Smutty, yes, but also humourous and VERY well written. Your depiction of Snape is frightfully accurate, and the sex scenes are hot, to say the least. I do hope your friend in the story is not real, otherwise she might be pretty upset that you painted her weak and shy, whilst Snape seems to be quite taken with you. She is almost the fifth wheel here, and I don't think Snape would care at all if she left. Anyway, greab. Ab. And I hope you continue on with this.

    --Janette
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2004
    I love your writing style, of course, and this is certainly one of the most original Snape/OFC(s?) stories I have read. (Honestly, how many Snape-meets-witch, Snape goes all snarkily googly eyed, Snape-shags-witch stories can one reasonably read?) And how many Snapefans haven't entertained almost exactly this fantasy, anyway? Snape... here... in the rain... dripping wet... mmmm. *evil grin*

    About your mastery of smut there can be no question. Post more lest I go mad!
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